SHAAM K BAAD (2)

kuch din pehley shariah jee ney farhat abbas shah ki famous ghazal shaam k baad post ki thi. aaj tak mujhey nahi pata chul saka k is ghazal k kitney parts hain because i’ve read many parts of this ghazal. ab may is ka 1 or part post ker raha hoin. hope u all will like it.

aankh ben jati hai sawan ki ghata shaam k baad
lot jata hai ager hai koe khafa shaam k baad

wo jo tal jati rahi sir say bala shaam k baad
koe to tha k jo deta tha dua shaam k baad

aa’hein bherti hai shab-e-hijr yateemoin ki terhan
sard ho jati hai her roz hawa shaam k baad

shaam tak qead raha kertey hain dil k under
dard ho jatey hain sarey hi raha shaam k baad

loog thak haar k so jatey hain lekin janaa’n
hum ney khosh ho k tera dard saha shaam k baad

shaam say pehley talak laakh sulaain rakhein
jaag uthti hai mohabbat ki ana shaam k baad

may ager khosh bhi hoin phir bhi merey seeney may
so’guwari koe roti hai sada shaam k baad

hum ney tenhaae say pocha k milo gi kab tak
us ney be-cheni say foren hi kaha shaam k baad

chaand jab ro k sitaaron say galey milta hai
ik ajab rang ki hoti hai fiza shaam k baad

lot aati hai meri shab ki ibadet khali
janey kis arsh pay rehta hai khuda shaam k baad


mohabat aesa derya hai
k baarish rooth bhi ja a
to pani kum nahi hota!

very beautiful

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bohat achay mahee. farhat abbas shah ki baat hi kuch aur hai.


aankhon ki is narm zamee'n pay
aap hi aap ug jatay hain
jin ko Aanso kehtay hain

Nice one ..

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I am like an Open Book Except for the few pages of my past, My life is an empty book. It takes the shape of a mystery, To me it does at least. For I cannot tell what happens next, Too many cliffhangers and too much suspense. But its clues all lead eventually to the same place, Unfortunately it does not say where. It only says get the next book, For in this one you’ ve ran out of room.

Thanx for giving another part of this ghazal

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Different people wrote it in different ways & the part “shaam ke baad” is common b/w them
I like all parts of it…

here is one more..

shairon ko dil ka dard sataata hai shaam ke baad kisi ki yaad buhat aati hai shaam ke baad Kuch aisi tadap hoti hai keh us dard ka aks Unki shayari mein bus jaata hai shaam ke baad

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[This message has been edited by Ek Shairah (edited April 16, 2002).]

thanks for the information shaira jee. i didn't know that different people wrote this ghazal.


mohabat aesa derya hai
k baarish rooth bhi ja a
to pani kum nahi hota!

bohat hi khooob

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thankz for sharing

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phiRa aj haq kaliye jaa’N fida karay koi
wafa bhi jhooM uthay yo wafa karay koi
nimaaZ 14 sadi se hai muntaziR logo|
HussaiN ke tarha aye ada karay koi
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~~Experience is the worst teacher; it gives the test before presenting the lesson.~~*

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Good one Mahee

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I am like an Open Book Except for the few pages of my past, My life is an empty book. It takes the shape of a mystery, To me it does at least. For I cannot tell what happens next, Too many cliffhangers and too much suspense. But its clues all lead eventually to the same place, Unfortunately it does not say where. It only says get the next book, For in this one you’ ve ran out of room.

thanks everybody.


mohabat aesa derya hai
k baarish rooth bhi ja a
to pani kum nahi hota!