shaam dhalti rahi.... yaad aati rahi .. (by me)

Arts & Culture Poetry ( Intikhaab & Sho'ra-e-Gupshup)
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well, after a long time mujhey eik or chota sa “dorah” parh hi gaya :~)

arz kiya he …

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shaam dhalti rahi, yaad aati rahi ..
din guzarta raha, raat jaati rahi ..

mujhko ehsaas tak na howa anch ka ..
zindagi mujhko, aise jalati rahi ..

raakh bankar bhi jeeta raha dosto ..
kuch hawa mujhko, aise uraati rahi ..

ishq karne laga tha pari zaat se ..
oski qurbat, farishta banati rahi ..

chain aata raha, hosh jaata raha ..
bekhudi istarhaan mujh pe chaati rahi ..

jab lagi thais dil ko, to ankhain kholeen..
dil-lagi onki, barsoon sulaati rahi ..

aas thi ke, gulistan bana longa main ..
khuwab kitne, muhabat dikhati rahi ..

hosh aaya, to sajda khuda ko kiya ..
aashqi, kufr hamse karati rahi ..

khatawar tha main gunahgaar tha ..
phir bhi, rehmat khuda ki bulati rahi ..

jab mohabat karo to khuda se karo ..
ik sabaq eysa, qismat sikhati rahi ..

by me

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I am like an Open Book Except for the few pages of my past, My life is an empty book. It takes the shape of a mystery, To me it does at least. For I cannot tell what happens next, Too many cliffhangers and too much suspense. But its clues all lead eventually to the same place, Unfortunately it does not say where. It only says get the next book, For in this one you’ ve ran out of room.

[This message has been edited by Azam#1 (edited July 12, 2002).]

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very nic

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keep it up

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MÙhb@t kÀ ÃnÒkhå SîÌSîÎã Hãï
KÆhî ý@$®Úb Káhï kîBàÎå H@ï

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.. nice to have you back ..

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.. with a personal touch as a gift .. thank you

“Do what you feel in your heart to be right - for you’ll be criticized
anyway. You’ll be damned if you do, and damned if you don’t.”

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Very Nice... Azam#1 !
keep it up !

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jab mohabat karo to khuda se karo ..
ik sabaq eysa, qismat sikhati rahi ..

So true

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Welcome back Azam!, where were U janaab?

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nice one azam

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atay jatey raha karen

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~pochteY ho wo kidheR gaya
daRd buN kaR
meRay dil maiN uteR gaya~

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Nice one Azam#1…keep it up

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MeiN pal do pal ka shaaer hooN…

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very nice... keep it up jee

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Bohaat kHoooB Aaazam bhaai

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**Be-kHudi le gai kahaaN ham ko
Der se intazaar hai apnaa
Jis ko tum Aasmaan kehte ho
So DiloN kaa gHubaar hai apnaa
**

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Buhat khoob

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Keep it Up

Owner of Mehkama-e-Sharafat
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Rude Boyz Rulez

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NIce Keep it up azam bhai

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**chand_chehra** shukriya moon face ji .. :~)

m_isabah thanks isabah … so nice of you :~)

~Maha~ shukriya mohtarma .. :~)

Amjad Chohan janab zara kaam main masroof tha .. wasn’t able to take out time for other activities .. neways now I am here … neways thanks for the warm welcome .. and the pasandidgi

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NikamiJano shukriya nikami ji … or aab ata jata rahonga cuz things are almost back to normal now

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Amal bohot bohot shukriya Amal sahab :~)

Rameesha thanks rameesha ji :~)

Tassneef pasandidgi ka shukriya tasneef ji :~)

SunnyBoy thanks speed master .. btw wat happend to your earlier nick ??? ;~)

Shaam-e-Firaq thanks shaam ko frock pehan-ne wali larki :~)

I am like an Open Book Except for the few pages of my past, My life is an empty book. It takes the shape of a mystery, To me it does at least. For I cannot tell what happens next, Too many cliffhangers and too much suspense. But its clues all lead eventually to the same place, Unfortunately it does not say where. It only says get the next book, For in this one you’ ve ran out of room.

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hosh aaya, to sajda khuda ko kiya ..
aashqi, kufr hamse karati rahi ..

nice

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keep it up

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har sher ke haqab mein jazaabat ka untamed allao jiski anch mein tapaa huwaa har misra dilkash o pur mohaani hai.

kuch ashaar ki to balaa ki zameen hai jinko kayee baar parhaa.

your effort to keep us in those who have privilege of experiencing the wave of emotion which goes through a poet's mind is truly great.
thankx

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nice one. keep it up.

For the world, u r somebody. But for somebody, u r the world.

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** NP ** ji, i mean nice poem azam uncle

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waise, aap shayir hein toh phir ap cafe mayn mayray poetry = khwaari wale dhaage pe roshni zaroor dalayn

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[This message has been edited by Faatma Habeeb (edited July 19, 2002).]

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Hhaha

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Fatima Aunty yeh to wo Hisaab huwa jaisse Pakistan meiN Local wagons waale ya BassoN waale Musaafir gher gher ker laate haiN
Hotels mein bhi aissa hi hota haii

aap bhi wohi Kaam kar rahi haiN naa lolzz aao dekhaa na Taaoo pakrhaa aur ghaseeT kar le gayee hahahaa
issi sislisle meiN aap yeh dekhyie

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CHICKEN CORNER MEIN

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Yahi Haal to nahi kahiN aap

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**Be-kHudi le gai kahaaN ham ko
Der se intazaar hai apnaa
Jis ko tum Aasmaan kehte ho
So DiloN kaa gHubaar hai apnaa
**

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Zabardast hai Azam

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—~—Maria—~—
~Kiya haaq wo jeena hai jo apnay hi liyay ho
Khud mit kar kisi aur ko mitnay se bacha lay~

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hmmm atey jatey rahain gain? …Allah kher karey

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~pochteY ho wo kidheR gaya
daRd buN kaR
meRay dil maiN uteR gaya~

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uff thanks uff ji :~)

MAREEZ_E_ISHQ Mareez sahab .. ab kiya arz karon .. aap ki replies to apni misaal aap hain .. masha Allah aap ko alfaaz par kaafi aboor hasil he .. :~) pasandidigi ka bohot bohot shukriya :~)

hunt4me thanks :~)

Faatma Habeeb shukriya mohtarma :~) I'll visit your thread soon Insha Allah :~)

Maheen2002 shukriya Maheen :~)

NikamiJano well said, I agree !! .. Allah khair kare or mujh ko apne hifz-o-amaan main rakhe ameen :~)

I am like an Open Book Except for the few pages of my past, My life is an empty book. It takes the shape of a mystery, To me it does at least. For I cannot tell what happens next, Too many cliffhangers and too much suspense. But its clues all lead eventually to the same place, Unfortunately it does not say where. It only says get the next book, For in this one you' ve ran out of room.