shaa'ed us kaali ne be khawaish-e-namoO ki hai

NikamiJano · April 14, 2003, 2:28am

shab ko jab kabhi maiN ne apni justaju ki hai
be-sadaa daRakhtooN ne teRi guftagoo ki hai

dil ki zid jo thehaRi hai ab tu us ko paa’na hai
fikeR-e-zindghi choRoO, baat aa’bRo ki hai !

poch tay’ghe qaatil se maqtooloN k mailaY maiN
hum ne kis ko dhoondha hai kis ki aa’Rzo ki hai

jis ko zaaRad kaR dala dhoop ki sikhaawat ne
shaa’ed us kaali ne be khawaish-e-namoO ki hai

jis ko umeR bhaR pooja ab usaY ganwa bethaY
hum ne ye bagaawat be us k roo’baRoo ki hai

Galaxy · April 14, 2003, 2:35am

nice:k:

WiseGuy · April 14, 2003, 4:05am

Wah Wah Bohat KHOOB JANU Jiii,
Thanks for Sharing.... :)

chand_chehra · April 14, 2003, 7:07am

Re: shaa’ed us kaali ne be khawaish-e-namoO ki hai

bohattttt khoob :k:

Dilsay · April 14, 2003, 7:45am

Masha Allah this is really great all of it.... thanks for sharing...

_Masoom_Muskaan · April 14, 2003, 11:28am

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Pramod · April 14, 2003, 11:43am

jis ko umeR bhaR pooja ab usaY ganwa bethaY
hum ne ye bagaawat be us k roo'baRoo ki hai

wah Bahna kya sher hai. bahot khub.
Thanks for sharing this beautiful piece.

Azad · April 14, 2003, 1:12pm

:k:

_kashish · April 14, 2003, 1:15pm

jis ko umeR bhaR pooja ab usaY ganwa bethaY
hum ne ye bagaawat be us k roo'baRoo ki hai

yeh she'r to bohat hi khoob hai!!

Azad · April 14, 2003, 1:21pm

[QUOTE]
Originally posted by *kashish: *
jis ko umeR bhaR pooja ab usaY ganwa bethaY
hum ne ye bagaawat be us k roo'baRoo ki hai

yeh she'r to bohat hi khoob hai!!
[/QUOTE]

Baghee ka sir qalam kia jay

ghazal_kisi_ke · April 14, 2003, 6:38pm

beautiful as usuall:k::k:
thanks

_Nazish · April 14, 2003, 10:59pm

wah wah beautiful

GuL-e-Tasbeeh · April 15, 2003, 7:05am

Re: shaa'ed us kaali ne be khawaish-e-namoO ki hai

[QUOTE]
*Originally posted by NikamiJano: *

shab ko jab kabhi maiN ne apni justaju ki hai
be-sadaa daRakhtooN ne teRi guftagoo ki hai

dil ki zid jo thehaRi hai ab tu us ko paa'na hai
fikeR-e-zindghi choRoO, baat aa'bRo ki hai !

poch tay'ghe qaatil se maqtooloN k mailaY maiN
hum ne kis ko dhoondha hai kis ki aa'Rzo ki hai

jis ko zaaRad kaR dala dhoop ki sikhaawat ne
shaa'ed us kaali ne be khawaish-e-namoO ki hai

jis ko umeR bhaR pooja ab usaY ganwa bethaY
hum ne ye bagaawat be us k roo'baRoo ki hai
[/QUOTE]

Beautiful NJ:-)

NikamiJano · April 15, 2003, 1:00pm

thanks Galzxy..WG...Dilsey...Nazish..azad..Gkk...an kashish..:)

NikamiJano · April 15, 2003, 1:02pm

[QUOTE]
*Originally posted by Pramod: *
jis ko umeR bhaR pooja ab usaY ganwa bethaY
hum ne ye bagaawat be us k roo'baRoo ki hai

wah Bahna kya sher hai. bahot khub.
Thanks for sharing this beautiful piece.
[/QUOTE]

thanks Pra g and welcome back..:)

NikamiJano · April 15, 2003, 1:04pm

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[QUOTE]
*Originally posted by GuL-e-Tasbeeh: *

Beautiful NJ:-)
[/QUOTE]

thanks Gul-e-tea and welcome back...:)

PS: ye sarey gum keon ho jatey aik dum se :)

NikamiJano · April 15, 2003, 1:05pm

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NikamiJano · April 15, 2003, 1:06pm

Re: Re: shaa’ed us kaali ne be khawaish-e-namoO ki hai

thanks chando g..

nikii · April 15, 2003, 1:14pm

Re: shaa'ed us kaali ne be khawaish-e-namoO ki hai

[QUOTE]
*Originally posted by NikamiJano: *

poch tay'ghe qaatil se maqtooloN k mailaY maiN
hum ne kis ko dhoondha hai kis ki aa'Rzo ki hai

jis ko umeR bhaR pooja ab usaY ganwa bethaY
hum ne ye bagaawat be us k roo'baRoo ki hai
[/QUOTE]

zaberdast siso :)

Amal · April 15, 2003, 1:51pm

Re: shaa’ed us kaali ne be khawaish-e-namoO ki hai

Lovely NikamiJi:k:…Bohat piyaari ghazal hey. Thanx for sharing:)