Re: Sehraa Ko . . .
itna asr kar daina bhi kaafi hai :p
Tactical retreat? ;) Maqsad kehney ka ye tha ke shaeri tthehri hum jesi dukhi aatmaaoN ka timepaas...aap is taraf kidhar? ;)
Re: Sehraa Ko . . .
aray yeh baad may poochna 
aur sunaou kidher ghayeb rehti ho 
arraayy nahee Amal ji, u got it all wrong, poetry isnt all about downhearted ppl. Its a poetic way of xpressin one’s feelin n understandin other’s. Y I like it b/c I need something soothin @ times to get away from medicine 
Re: Sehraa Ko . . .
Aap kehti heiN to maan letey heiN. Go ke hum qaael nahi huwey aap ki baat sey. Wesey koi kalaam peish kareiN to pata chaley ke aap sahi keh rahi heiN ya… :~)
Re: Sehraa Ko . . .
apna kalaam?
dig in this forum ull find some 
Re: Sehraa Ko . . .
hmmm...this is a big asking.
Re: Sehraa Ko . . .
**esi terha ka aik aor b shiar hay **
sehra ko bohat naaz hay apni virani par
daikha nai jo us ne mera ujhrha howa dil
Re: Sehraa Ko . . .
wah wah wah wahhhhhhhh
Re: Sehraa Ko . . .
^ samajh mai b kuch aya hay ya ese hi wah wah wah wah ki rat laga rakhi hay :p
Re: Sehraa Ko . . .
g nahi..
aya sub kuch samaj…koi dil wil ki bath ho rahi hai
Re: Sehraa Ko . . .
^ nai sehra ki baaat ho rahi thi 
Re: Sehraa Ko . . .
nice one emmy :k:
Re: Sehraa Ko . . .
so nice, so very true, EMM. :)
keep writing!
dushwari
Re: Sehraa Ko . . .
I think I have read this version.
nonetheless, a very good shair
remember that sometimes a shair can have different versions as it is later revised by the poet himself…
for example, Ahmed Faraz’s famous shair has a revised version too that I have read.. I am not sure which one was the revision but the most famous is the second one
Tum Rasm-e-Duniya ko bhee Akhlaas samjahtaY ho Faraz
Dost hotaa naheeN, har haath milaanaY waalaa
and the revision
Tum Takalluf ko bhee Akhlaas samjahtaY ho Faraz
Dost hotaa naheeN, har haath milaanaY waalaa
Re: Sehraa Ko . . .
Wah! :k: Buhat khub:lajawab: Buhat sy logon ky liy hasby hal 
Re: Sehraa Ko . . .
^ shukrya :roman:
Re: Sehraa Ko . . .
opzz mai bh wohi samjh sehra :P haha