Sawan

Swera · July 18, 2003, 9:23pm

SAWAN

Suno,
Is baar jab sawan bharsay ga
Hum bhi choopkay say
Sang us kay bharsain gay
Suno,
Is baar sawan bohat ajeeb ho ga
Bahir say barish barsay gi
Bijali chamkay gi, badal bhi garjay ga
Magar yai bhi qanoon hay kay
Hum choopkay say barsain gay
Suno,
Kon hum ko thamay ga jab badal garjay ga?
Hum daar kay hood main simat jayain gay
Yai to socho…
Kooch keh bhi na payain gay
Hum maar hi jayain gay!
Suno,
Badl jo pani barsatain hain
Un say to silab a jata hay,
Fasal hari hari bhi ho jati hay
Hamri ank kay pani say to bus
Hamara dil hi dukta hay!
Suno,
Fasloon ko barish ki zaroorat hoti hay
Loogo ko bhi pani ki sidat say chahat hoti hay
Magar, huamary ansoo to bewuqat say hotain hain.
Suno,
Ho sakay to badloon kay sang
Tum bhi chalay ana…
Bun kay ghata tum cha jana…
Ajana na tum a jana….

By Subha.

_Nazish · July 18, 2003, 10:05pm

Nice

Swera · July 18, 2003, 10:20pm

Thanks… lakin royaiN to nahiN:(

ghazal_kisi_ke · July 19, 2003, 12:21am

its really sad:( but i’m not gona cry because u just said^^:D
anyways its beautiful:k::k: keep it up:flower1:

WiseGuy · July 19, 2003, 5:09am

really is baar sawan bohat hee ajeeb hai
bohat TooT kay baras raha hai
bijli bhi kaRak rahee hai chamak rahee hai
magar aisa tu hamesha hee hota hai
sawan tu sawan hee hota hai na...

waisay bohat achi hai...
bye the way kyu itni muztarib kaifeeyat hai aap ki... ;)

chodhry · July 19, 2003, 5:37am

Re: Sawan

[QUOTE]
*Originally posted by Swera: *
SAWAN

Hum daar kay hood main simat jayain gay
Yai to socho…
Kooch keh bhi na payain gay
Hum maar hi jayain gay!

By Subha.
[/QUOTE]

now thts the beauty...bohat khub Sbha, shabash, keep it up.

Amarbail1 · July 19, 2003, 6:55pm

Swera its really nice …:k:

HeArT_HaCKeR · July 19, 2003, 6:55pm

boht achay Swera jee :)

Dj_Aqua · July 19, 2003, 9:00pm

:k:

Swera · July 21, 2003, 1:54pm

Thanks…
Ji rona Mana hay:D

Swera · July 21, 2003, 1:55pm

[QUOTE]
*Originally posted by WiseGuy: *
really is baar sawan bohat hee ajeeb hai
bohat TooT kay baras raha hai
bijli bhi kaRak rahee hai chamak rahee hai
magar aisa tu hamesha hee hota hai
sawan tu sawan hee hota hai na...

waisay bohat achi hai...
bye the way kyu itni muztarib kaifeeyat hai aap ki... ;)
[/QUOTE]

Acha ji, Thankssssss

baas ji kooch na hi poochaiN ap to :p;)

Swera · July 21, 2003, 1:56pm

Re: Re: Sawan

[QUOTE]
*Originally posted by chodhry: *

now thts the beauty...bohat khub Sbha, shabash, keep it up.
[/QUOTE]

Thank you.
I will:)

Swera · July 21, 2003, 1:57pm

Thanks…Glad u liked it..

Swera · July 21, 2003, 1:57pm

[QUOTE]
*Originally posted by HeArT HaCKeR: *
boht achay Swera jee :)
[/QUOTE]

Thankx..

Swera · July 21, 2003, 1:58pm

Thanks.

_MuNiYa · July 21, 2003, 2:51pm

bohat dair key baad ithni achi nazm parri hai. :k: :k:

Muslim_Queen · July 21, 2003, 2:58pm

lovely......

system · July 21, 2003, 4:16pm

BeaUtiful :k:

Swera · July 22, 2003, 8:05pm

Thanks, chalaiN paaR to li hay na, hum ko dekaiN jo paRna chahtaiN haiN paaR hi nahiN paty:D

Swera · July 22, 2003, 8:06pm

[QUOTE]
*Originally posted by Muslim_Queen: *
lovely......
[/QUOTE

Thank you...]