Sawan rut aur uRti purwa tere naam

Arts & Culture Poetry ( Intikhaab & Sho'ra-e-Gupshup)
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Sawan rut aur urti purwa tere naam
Dhoop nagar se hai yeh tohfa tere naam

Surkh gulabon kay saray mousam tere liye
Khawabon ka har ik darecha tere naam

Chand ki aankhein phool ki khushboo behti raat
Qurbat ka har ik waseela tere naam

Baraf main phela shaam ka dhundulka tere liye
har ik subah ka pehla ujala tere naam

Hansti hui si teri aankhein mere liye
behti jheel main phool kanwal ka terre naam

Teri yaad ka behta dariya mere liye
Chahat ka yeh tanha jazerah tere naam

Duniya bhar main jitnay manzar achay hain
Unka husn aur shor hawa ka tere naam

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Re: Sawan rut aur uRti purwa tere naam

baRaa tarannum hai aur alfaaz kaa utaar chaRhaao aise hai jaise bahtii nadiyaa...i liked it :) bahot Khoob :)

kia lafz "IK" [mere Khyaal se] "EK" nahiiN hai? lafz-e-"IK" se adaayegii emN luknat dar-pesh maHsoos hotii hai!

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Re: Sawan rut aur uRti purwa tere naam

Hansti hui si teri aankhein mere liye
behti jheel main phool kanwal ka terre naam

:k:
vry good muqawee bhai

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Re: Sawan rut aur uRti purwa tere naam

Thanks arain bhai.

KKF, I think you are right. Ik kehne se shair main sakta Parta hai

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Re: Sawan rut aur uRti purwa tere naam

bhens jese aankhen to suni thein yi chand jitni bari aankhen first time sun rahi hun:eeek: :eek:

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Re: Sawan rut aur uRti purwa tere naam

chand ki aankhen kaha gaya hai chand jitni aankhen nahin

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Re: Sawan rut aur uRti purwa tere naam

wah....nice.

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Re: Sawan rut aur uRti purwa tere naam

Thank you Guriya Ji

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Re: Sawan rut aur uRti purwa tere naam

My pleasure..

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Re: Sawan rut aur uRti purwa tere naam

beautiful