Sawalia Nishaan (?)

chodhry · March 16, 2004, 4:42pm

MeiN!
key tashna lab,
taptey sehra meiN
nangey payooN chalta hova
Thaka harra, nidhaal musafir

Tum!
key sakhat dhoop sey jaltey reigzaar meiN
Saya, Khushbu, Thandi hawa ka jhonka
Sarsabz Nakhlistan!

**Barha khud sey poocha
Kia ‘Tum’ ho meri manzil?

yaa ess nerm chahooN ko choor ker
kissi madhur geet ki pukkar
kissi sirab khawb ka taqub
kahien gumnam wissal banheiN
mera muqadar heiN**

Ess sawal ka jawaab
gehrey samundar ki teh meiN
seep key dil mein chuppey
kissi moti ki maaNind O’jhal hey

‘Tum’ apni tamaam ter Muhabat key bawajood
abhi tak meri zindagee ka ‘Sawalia Nishan’ ho

Dilsay · March 16, 2004, 5:52pm

Very nice

chodhry · March 16, 2004, 5:59pm

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*Originally posted by Dilsay: *
Very nice
[/QUOTE]

Thank You Dilsay

Dilsay · March 16, 2004, 6:21pm

Very nice

Koyal · March 16, 2004, 10:15pm

nice one choudry saab:)

Azad · March 16, 2004, 10:28pm

good question

cuteepie · March 17, 2004, 5:38am

very nice :k:

chodhry · March 17, 2004, 6:44am

Thank you Koyal, cuteepie n Azad

ASA · March 17, 2004, 7:01am

very nice… :k:

chodhry · March 17, 2004, 7:28am

Thank you AsSweetAs

Swera · March 17, 2004, 4:12pm

“?” ko “?” hi rehnay daiN to acha hay
“!” ko “!” hi rehnay daiN to acha hay

samjay???

BTW, nice, keep it up:D

chodhry · March 18, 2004, 9:21am

Thanks Swera

btw samajh nahien aye

chodhry · April 1, 2004, 1:06pm

so finaly that '?' mark has turned into an '!' mark on 29th March. :)

chodhry · April 3, 2004, 1:14pm

shorrry!!! ma mishtake

Man_of_Courage · April 4, 2004, 4:01pm

very nice Chaudry sahab...

BoReD_iN_BrIsBaNe · April 4, 2004, 4:53pm

nice :k:

HAMMAD · April 4, 2004, 7:13pm

ooye mayra chodryy jee share jeooo :D

DiYa · April 5, 2004, 10:32am

good one

Philanthrope · April 5, 2004, 4:14pm

Lovely!! Really a master piece :k: Keep it up

riva · April 13, 2004, 9:01am

Re: Sawalia Nishaan (?)

[QUOTE]
*Originally posted by chodhry: *
MeiN!
key tashna labbi key taptey sehra meiN
nangey payooN chalta hova
Thaka harra, nidhaal musafir

Tum!
key sakhat dhoop sey jaltey reigzaar meiN
Saya, Khushbu, Thandi hawa ka jhonka
Sarsabz Nakhlistan!

**Barha khud sey poocha
Kia 'Tum' ho meri manzil?

yaa ess nerm chahooN ko choor ker
kissi madhur geet ki pukkar
kissi sirab khawb ka taqub
kahien gumnam wissal banheiN
mera muqadar heiN**

Nice hai je
Ess sawal ka jawaab
gehrey samundar ki teh meiN
seep key dil mein chuppey
kissi moti ki maaNind O'jhal hey

'Tum' apni tamaam ter Muhabat key bawajood
abhi tak meri zindagee ka 'Sawalia Nishan' ho