Sari Dunya Khafa Si Lagti Hai..

Arts & Culture Poetry ( Intikhaab & Sho'ra-e-Gupshup)

redidentity June 15, 2007, 5:41am 1

Meri Aik Nazm,

Ek Teray Rooth Janay Se
Sari Dunya Khafa Si Lagti Hai

Jab Hon Charon Taraf Ye Sannatay
Dil Ki Dharkan Sada Si Lagti Hai

Her Samay Jab Azaab Utrain Tou
Zindagi Khud Qaza Si Lagti Hai

Aise Lamhe Pe Teray Honton Per
Muskurahat, Dua Si Lagti Hai

Sochna tumko, Tumko Sochtay Rehna
Ye Adat Bhi Dil Ruba Si Lagti Hai

Teri Ankhon Main Saadgi Itni
Kion Tu Sab Se Juda Si Lagti Hai

(Ahmer)

Umeed Hai Aap Logon Ko Pasand Aye Gi..

Regards,

chacha_Ghalib June 19, 2007, 5:32am 2

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Her Samay Jab Azaab Utrain Tou
Zindagi Khud Qaza Si Lagti Hai

wah... kaya khayal hai

redidentity March 1, 2008, 6:12am 3

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buhat shukria :)

bheegiyaad March 2, 2008, 1:06am 4

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very nice :k:

babar444 March 2, 2008, 6:21am 5

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bahut khoob,good poetry

redidentity March 3, 2008, 1:26pm 6

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thnx alot bheegiyaad and babar..

*~* GS Police Station *~*

_Masoom_Muskaan March 3, 2008, 7:36pm 7

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v nice :)

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redidentity March 4, 2008, 5:35am 8

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thnx MM :)

GuL-e-Tasbeeh March 4, 2008, 10:21am 9

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Very sweet poem Thanks for sharing Ahmar:-)

Mostar95 March 6, 2008, 8:49am 10

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Yes very lovely poem! You're a poet too! Well done.

Innocent_Attitude March 6, 2008, 12:36pm 11

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What a sequence of thoughts Ahmer Bhai!!!

Nation on the verge of a nervous breakdown - Fatima Bhutto

NikamiJano March 6, 2008, 7:19pm 12

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Beautiful sharing red :)keep it up

redidentity March 7, 2008, 6:40am 13

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thank you Gul jee

thanks Mostar jee

adaab Innocent for such appreciation

thank you Nikami jee..

fghd March 20, 2008, 4:27am 14

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sweeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeett stufff matey!!

redidentity March 20, 2008, 12:00pm 15

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zahay naseeb.. aap ne bhi idher ka rukh kia..

thnx

fizatiq March 21, 2008, 7:58am 16

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kya baat hai...........buhat zabardast......ahmer jab likhtay hain app kamal likhtay hain.......keep writting and keep sharing.........

being_lonely March 21, 2008, 5:24pm 17

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kiski zameen mei ye ghazal likhi hi naam to bataiye

redidentity March 22, 2008, 5:35am 18

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thank you fiza for such sweet appreciation..

sachi mujhe nahi maloom if i have used any poet’s zameen

fghd March 22, 2008, 5:53am 19

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ham aatay jaatay rehtein hain
jab kisi ka kalaam had say zyadah pasund aajaye
tou post kar daytein hain

:D

redidentity March 22, 2008, 7:47am 20

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