Sar E Taaq E Jaan Na Charagh Hai Pas E Baam E Shab Na Sehar Koii

Arts & Culture Poetry ( Intikhaab & Sho'ra-e-Gupshup)

deep_ocean August 15, 2007, 6:20am 1

Sar E Taaq E Jaan Na Charagh Hai Pas E Baam E Shab Na Sehar Koii
Ajab Eik Arsa E Daraz Hai Na Gumaan Hai Na Khabar Koii

Nahi Ab To Koii Malal Bhi , Kisi Wapsi Ka Khyaal Bhi
Gham E Be-Kassi Ney Mitta Diya Meray Dil Mein Tha Bhi Agar Koii

Tujhey Kya Khabar K Raat Bhar Tujhey Dekh Paney Ko Eik Nazar
Raha Sath Chaand Key Muntazir Teri Khirkiyoun Sey Udhar Koii

Sar E Shakh E Jaan Teray Naam Ka Ajab Eik Taza Gulaab Tha
Jisey Aandhiyoun Sey Khatar Na Tha Jisey Tha Khizaan Ka Na Dar Koii

Teri Be-Rukhii Key Diyaar Mein Ghanii Teergii Key Hisaar Mein
Jalay Kis Trah Sey Charagh E Jaan Karay Kis Traf Ko Saffar Koii

Katay Waqt Chahey Azaab Mein Kisi Khwaab Mein Ya Saraab Mein
Jo Nazar Sey Door Nikal Gya Usey Yaad Karta Hai Har Koii

**Sar E Bazm Jitney Charagh They Wo Tamam Ramz Shanaas They
Teri Chashm E Khush Key Lehaaz Sey Nahii Bolta Tha Magar Koii
**

redidentity August 15, 2007, 6:24am 2

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Nice.. :)

deep_ocean August 15, 2007, 6:32am 3

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thanks :)

Shab-e-Hijar August 15, 2007, 6:53am 4

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very

Daanie August 15, 2007, 12:13pm 5

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wonderful sharing :)

HeArT_HaCKeR August 15, 2007, 12:17pm 6

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beautiful… thanks for sharing

deep_ocean August 15, 2007, 4:06pm 7

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thanks :)

Jhanjharewali August 16, 2007, 2:46pm 8

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aap ke intekhab nihayati umda, lajawab aur dilkash haen. I must applaud ur taste in poetry

babri August 16, 2007, 3:26pm 9

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Nice.:k:

deep_ocean August 16, 2007, 4:13pm 10

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thanks a lot JW :)

The Random Thread

tum_bin_1 August 17, 2007, 11:53am 11

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Very Nice :)

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_Masoom_Muskaan August 17, 2007, 12:13pm 12

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koch bacho ke leye asan urdu meyn bhe lekha keryn:halo:

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babri August 17, 2007, 4:02pm 13

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bikul sehi kaha.

Prince_Ali August 17, 2007, 5:10pm 14

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very nice :k:
thanx for sharin…

deep_ocean August 17, 2007, 5:25pm 15

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Bachon ki urdu issi tarah improve ho gi

aap apni teacher se kaho na ke wo samjha dain

thanks

_Masoom_Muskaan August 17, 2007, 6:49pm 16

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mere teacher ke pas time he nehe he :(

deep_ocean August 17, 2007, 6:54pm 17

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change the teacher than

_Masoom_Muskaan August 17, 2007, 6:57pm 18

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oar koe achee nehe he :(

deep_ocean August 17, 2007, 7:02pm 19

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teacher se special request karain

_Masoom_Muskaan August 17, 2007, 7:03pm 20

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wo request kero toh kaan band ker leteyn heyn

ps: koe aek problem he