sangsaar

Arts & Culture Poetry ( Intikhaab & Sho'ra-e-Gupshup)
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inkaar kernai wali pyar se humari khud shikastha dil nikli
aur hum hain keh zalim yar samajh bhathai hain

na samajh hai dunya keh dekh ke therai yad ke mothi
log merai ankh ko ashkbaar samjh bhathai hain

samjh boojh ki baath hai werna hotha aisa kion
ikk lams ke thersai ko wajib sangsaar samajh bhthai hain

kon ketha hai dunya kisi bath pe muthafiq nahin
sare log merai yar ko dildaar samajh bhathai hain

Ajab tahqazai hain unn kai niagahon kai bhi tanweer
khud hain madhosh, humain bada khwar samajh bhathai hain

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Re: sangsaar

Not bad khan126... try to read established poets if you want to improve :)

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Re: sangsaar

hope it get better.

:) thanks Amal....

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Re: sangsaar

One more thing, if you visit our Intikhaab section also, you will extend your readership. Try it :)

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Re: sangsaar

nice 1...follow Amal's suggestions.