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ham aseeraan-e-ahl-e-ahdy wafaa,behissi kab talak rawaa rakhty..
duston sy khloos mil na sakaa,dushmanoon sy gilaa kiyaa karty..?
jinsy haasil hu sirf ranj-o-alam,dard-e-dil ki dawaa wo kiyaa karty
behissi kaa libaas oorahaa thhaa,dilka madd,aa kiyaa bayaan karty
koi ik phool tumsy khil na sakaa,khushk kalyaan hi kuchh ataa karty
khaali daaman koi jiye kesy? kuchh tu yaadon kaa zaad-e-raah karty
kitni shiddat sy tumko chaahaa thaa,itnaa ehsaas tu zaraa karty…
zindagi kuchh sehel hi hu jaati,aek wadaa ju tum wafaa kartay…
sheesha-e-dil thhaa choor choor huaa,sang baari na yon rawwa rakhty
kitni thi aas tum sy jaan-e-jahaan,mery zakhmon ki kuchh dawaa karty
***aapko maan apni zaat py thhaa,kuchh hamen naaz apny aap py thha ***
yon wo nazuk si duor toot gaii,jiski bunyaad par wafaa
kartayy…!!!
(s.naz)
muncho
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Re: sang baari na yuon rawaan rakhty...
jinsy haasil hu sirf ranj-o-alam,dard-e-dil ki dawaa wo kiyaa karty
behissi kaa libaas oorahaa thhaa,dilka madd,aa kiyaa bayaan karty(bayaan kiyaa kartay)
bahut khoob, aur akhri shair mai 'naz' khoob istemal keeta.
Re: sang baari na yuon rawaan rakhty...
vry nice
Re: sang baari na yuon rawaan rakhty…
hmmm 
S.786
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Re: sang baari na yuon rawaan rakhty...
nawaazish...janaab
Re: sang baari na yuon rawaan rakhty…
bohat khoob :k:
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Re: sang baari na yuon rawaan rakhty...
mujhy real khushi huti hy...jab chcha aap raay dety hen.......v.v.thanks
Ali_2
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Re: sang baari na yuon rawaan rakhty…
buhat khoob :k:
behissi kaa libaas oorahaa thhaa,dilka madd,aa kiyaa bayaan karty(bayaan kiyaa kartay)
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thanks 4 cmnts…
meny misry ko sawaaliya banany k liye is trah likhaa…
warna munasib aap k kehny k mutaabiq hy…thanks..again
Re: sang baari na yuon rawaan rakhty...
Bohot Khoob..
kafi achey andaaz se Giley bayan kiye hain..specially
"*koi ik phool tumsy khil na sakaa,khushk kalyaan hi kuchh ataa karty"
*its really impressive. !!!
Thanks for sharing !!!***
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Re: sang baari na yuon rawaan rakhty...
v.v.thanks 4 liking...s...ji
mujhy real khushi huti hy...jab chcha aap raay dety hen.......v.v.thanks
zarra nawazi hai aap ki warna hum kaya hamari aouqaat kaya
KinaRa
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Re: sang baari na yuon rawaan rakhty...
bohat achay agar ap ne waqie he khud se likhi lagta hia kahiN parhi hia pahlay ap kahin aur b post kartey/karti :)
rabiee
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Re: sang baari na yuon rawaan rakhty...
thanx for sharin
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bohat achay agar ap ne waqie he khud se likhi lagta hia kahiN parhi hia pahlay ap kahin aur b post kartey/karti :)
dear kinara..
ye meri new ghazal hy....naqal karny waala 1 din zuroor pakra jata hy..
men ny kissi aur form pr bhi ye ghazal nhi post ki...thanks 4 liking...