Sandesa

_Nazish · June 3, 2003, 10:42pm

usse kehna kabhi milne chala ayey.... hamare paa'oN maiN jo rasta tha raste maiN paiR they paiRoN maiN jitni ta'iroN ki toliaN hum se mila kartee theiN uRte uRte thak gayeee haiN woh ghani shakheN jo hum per saya kartee theeN woh sab murjha gayee haiN tum usee kehna kabhi milne chala ayey

laboN per lafz haiN
lafzon maiN koi dastan, qisa, kahani
jo usse aksar sunaya kartey they
kisey ja ker sunaein gey
bataein gey
keh hum mehraab abroo mein sitarey tankney waley
dar-e-ab bosa-e-izhar ki dastak se aksar kholney waley
kabhi bikhri huee zulfon mein hum
mehtab k gajrey bana ker bandhney waley
chiragh or ainey k darmian
kab se sar-e-sahilkharey mojon ko taktey hein

usey kehna
hum aa ker khud usey miltey
magar maqtal badaltey mosmon k khoon mein rangeen hein
or hum
k hum mein aaj bhi
ik umer ki waraftagi or wehshaton ka raqs jari hey
woh bazijo bisaat-e-jaan per khaili thee
abhi hum ne jeeti hey na haari hey

usey kehna kabhi milney chala ayey
k ab ki bar shayad
apni bari hey …

Black_Mamba · June 3, 2003, 11:17pm

Re: Sandesa

WAH, Kya ‘Flow Chart’ Hai Iss Nazam Ki. :k:

Par Mujh Se Na Kehalwana. KyoNke

MaiN BoloN Ga to Phir Aana Bhi Hoga To Na Aaye Ga
Wo Qismat Hum Ne Paayi hai
KaraiN Gar Raat Ko Khwahish Ke Ham Chanda Main BaithaiN Ge
To Uss Shab Chand Na Nikle
Chaman MaiN Pur-Faza JhonkoN ka sun Kar Hum Chalay JaaiN
To Uss Din Loo Hi Ham PayeiN
Teri Taqdeer MaiN Shayid Ho Milna, MaiN KahoN Ga to
KahiN Taqdeer Teri Na Badal Jaaye.
MaiN BoloN Ga to Phir Aana Bhi Hoga To Na Aaye Ga
Wo Qismat Hum Ne Paaye hai

(Black Mamba) In reply to Nazish

Azad · June 4, 2003, 5:53am

oor naseeb ka akss naam bhi nazar ata hay ... :D

Philanthrope · June 4, 2003, 6:05am

wah... so beautiful!
Thanks for sharing Nazish..

Azad · June 4, 2003, 6:07am

pharma long time no c

Dilsay · June 4, 2003, 7:15am

Beautiful.... thanks for sharing

Golden_Scorpion · June 4, 2003, 9:55am

Re: Re: Sandesa

Zabardast Nazish Gi… Gr8 :biggthumb
And… Black Mamba Gi… Kia Jawab Hay… Wah Wah

chand_chehra · June 4, 2003, 7:57pm

wowww very nice :k:
n fikar not jaldi ajaye gay

system · June 4, 2003, 8:36pm

Beautiful :k::k:

system · June 4, 2003, 9:22pm

Kya baat hai aapki Nazish aur Black Mamba! Just great!:biggthumb

koiDost · June 4, 2003, 10:33pm

Wah Bohat Khoob :k:

Swera · June 5, 2003, 4:56am

bohat khoob.

HeArT_HaCKeR · June 5, 2003, 8:09pm

1 of my fav:k::k::k:

Paglee · June 5, 2003, 9:20pm

:k:

_Nazish · June 6, 2003, 1:22am

Thanks everyone.

BM zalim jawab :)

freestylla · June 6, 2003, 1:33am

Very Nice Nazish, Keep it up. I just like a few poems and dont reply mostly in poetry but his one is an exception.
Good work.

SEHMI SEHMI SI HAR EK AAS LAGEY
ZINDAGI RAM KA BANWAAS LAGEY
TU KE BEHETI HOYEE NADIYAA KE SAMANAY
TUJ KO DEKHOUn TO MUJHKO PYAAS LAGEY

Gemini_the_Great · June 6, 2003, 2:12am

Re: Sandesa

[QUOTE]
*Originally posted by ~Nazish~: *
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usey kehna
hum aa ker khud usey miltey
magar maqtal badaltey mosmon k khoon mein rangeen hein
or hum
k hum mein aaj bhi
ik umer ki waraftagi or wehshaton ka raqs jari hey
woh bazijo bisaat-e-jaan per khaili thee
abhi hum ne jeeti hey na haari hey

usey kehna kabhi milney chala ayey
k ab ki bar shayad
apni bari hey ......
[/QUOTE]

beautiful choice :-)

PS: yeah larki keep sending sendasay ... thats the only thing you can do now :-p

_Nazish · June 6, 2003, 3:27am

thank you freestylla bhai

GTG thanko

p.s meri bebasi ka mazak na uRao

Black_Mamba · June 6, 2003, 12:31pm

Zalim Jawab KahaN. MaiN Ne To Aik Mukhliss Mashwara Diya Hai. Aur Air baar Phir Kehta HooN
Mujh Se Na Kehalwana

ghazal_kisi_ke · June 6, 2003, 7:41pm

nazish bohut khoob:k::k:
keep it up:k: