Sandaisa....

Usay kehna hamaray paaon mai jo rasta tha rastay mai pairr thay pairroon pe jtni tairoon ki toliyaan hum se mila kertee theen ab wo urtay urtay thak gai hain wo ghani shakhain jo hu per saya kerti theen wo sab murjha gai hain tum usay kehna laboon pe lafz hain Lafzoon mai koi dastaan,koi qissa kahani jo usay aksar sunatay thay kisay ja ker sunaiye gay?? bataiye gay k hum mehrab-e-abro mai sitaray tanknay walay Dar-e-lab bosa-e-izhar ki dastak se akser kholnay walay kabhee bikhri hoi zulfoon mai hum mehtaab k gajray bana ker bandnay walay chiraag aur aainay k darmiyaan kab se sar-e-sahil kharay maujoon ko taktay hain usay kehna usay hum yaad kertay hain usay kehna hum aa ker khud usay miltay ager maqtal, badaltay mausamoon k khoon mai rangeen hain aur hum aisay bahut say mausumoon k darmiyaan tanha kharay hain janay kab bulawa ho?k hum mai aaj bhee eik umer ki waraftagi aur weshatoon ka raq's jari hai,wo bazi jo bisaat-e-jaan pe khaili thee abhee hum ne na jeeti na hari hai usay kehna kabhee milnay chalay aay usay hum yaad kertay hain

very nice.. :k:

luv this poem.. but i think ke end mein ye aisee hai

usay kehna
kabhee milnay chalay aay
ke ab ki baar bhee shaid
apnii hee barii hai…

:slight_smile:

may be… mujay kesi ne mail ke thee… neway… thanks for correcting.. :slight_smile:

yup ur rite Hacker :slight_smile: And nice one Sweet :k:

woww beautifull :k:

nice one :k:

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v nice one of ma fav thanks 4 sharin again..:)

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may be..... mujay kesi ne mail ke thee.... neway... thanks for correcting.. :)
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no problem.. :)