Samundar Paar Pakistaniyon Kay Naam

Tum door basay ho, kya jano
Kya des kay ghum ko pehchano
Dukh sachcha hai to laut aao
Issy dhoop main jee kay dikhkao

Jis dhoop main hum sub jeetay hain
Ghurbat kay zeher ko peetay hain

Jehan nanhay munnay haaton say
Qaleen banaey jaatay hain
Oonchay oonchay aiwanon kay
Farshon pay sajaey jaatay hain

Bholee behnon kay jismon ko
Sholon say sajaya jaata hai
Izzat ghairat kay maslon par
Jismon ko kaata jaata hai

Shifa khanon kay darwazay jehan
Dastak-e-zar pay khultay hain
Bhookay nangay bachay kitnay
Kuch jeetay hain, kuch martay hain

Gar himmat hai to laut aao
Issy dhoop main jee kay dikhlao

Batain karna to aasan hai
Par baton say hai kya haasil
Batain to hum bhee kartay hain
Tum kartay ho to kartay raho
Pardaes kay ghar main bastay raho
Achcha khao, achcha pehno
Haan! Batain bhee kartay jao
Baatain karna to aasan hai
Baatain to hum bhi kartay hain
Par APNAY ghar main bastay hain

Dukh saccha hai to laut aao
Issy dhoop main jee kay dikhlao

… quite rightly said .. but a bit difficult to adhere to .. not because we (general terms) dont want to . .but because we cant
.. thank you for the quite a emotional piece of work ..

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To see a world in a grain of sand
And heaven in a wild flower
Hold affinity in the palm of your hand
And eternity in an hour

This inability to come back is what this poem elucidates in a form of comparative living

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I know its difficult to come back

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[This message has been edited by Perfectionist (edited April 17, 2002).]

Hey perfectionist …
Ur poem make me sad

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, u know wut i just love my country but can’t come back and there are so many reasons for that.
I think people living in pakistan enjoying their lives more than us(pardesi people).
Living in their own land with all relatives & friends is much better than living far away from all of them.

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Life is like a piano — what you get out of it,
Depends on how you play it.

nice one perf....ap ne tu kuch logo ko rula dala


~pochteY ho wo kidheR gaya
daRd buN kaR
meRay dil maiN uteR gaya~

You are right Shaira gee, there is nothing sweeter than your own homeland. The kind of comfort that you get from the familiar culture and known people and their behaviour patterns is no where to be found anywhere else. You know I have always found myself struggling whenever circumstances force me to think of settling somewhere outside my own country! I think I love my own country and my own people (however bad they may be lacking in any kind of civic responsibilities) but I love them. Thanks for appreciating this poem. It moved me also though I am not a pardesi!

Chalein un ko apne watan kee yaad to aayee! Mujhe khushee huee ke kuch log roye bhee. Un kuch logon ko meree taraf se duaein de deejiyega

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watan k bahar walay nahi jo watan k under bethay hian ..wo bahar waloon k leay roey

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~pochteY ho wo kidheR gaya
daRd buN kaR
meRay dil maiN uteR gaya~

Ab mein koi farishta to naheen ke aisay hee andaza lagaoon ke kaun kis ke liye roya? Zahir hai yeh nazm bahir walon ke liye hee likhee gayee hai to rona to un ko chahiye na! Dil ko hilaane walee nazmein bhee kuch asar naheen karten tum par? Sangdil kaheen ke tum pardesi log

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nice


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kis ko peeche chor aayee hain nik?

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Beautiful poem. Indeed its full of feelings! Kis kee yaad satatee hai aapko? Batao usay interpol ke zareeaye bulwa lete hain

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capo peechay nahi chor k aiey yahan a k peechay lagay

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~pochteY ho wo kidheR gaya
daRd buN kaR
meRay dil maiN uteR gaya~

Tabhee to perfect tumhein watan kee yaad dila raha hai..samjha karo na

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Really…

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..ab nikamy samjain tu kesay samjain boliey

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~pochteY ho wo kidheR gaya
daRd buN kaR
meRay dil maiN uteR gaya~

Yeh to Perfect hee samjha sakta hai perfectly

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wow,
indeed bohat hi ghoob haye…

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ham se haye dunya
é dunya waloun…

Thank you Space Master and Hannie

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Thanks Nikami and Capri

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[This message has been edited by Perfectionist (edited April 23, 2002).]

Altaf Hussain kee

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Bula lo na usay. I miss him

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hey! acha tareeqa hai tariqeen-e-watan ko watan kee yaad dila ke phaansne ka

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