Samajh jana keh wo mai hoon!!!

EEMAAN · April 24, 2007, 12:58pm

Hatheli samnay rakhna
Keh sub aansoo girain us mein
Jou ruk jaye ga honton per
Samajh jana keh wo mai hoon

***Kabhi jo chaand ko daikho ***
Tou Tum yun muskara dayina
Jou chal jaye hawa thandi
Tou aankhain bund ker layina
Jou jhonka taiz ho sub say
Samjh jana keh wo mai hoon

Jou ziyada yaad aaon mai
Tou tum rou layina jee bhar k
Agar hichki koi aaye
Samajh jana keh wo mai hoon

Agar tum bhoolna chaho
Mujhay shayad bhula dou tum
***Magar jab saans tum layina ***
Samajh jana keh wo mai hoon!!!

decent_Felow · April 24, 2007, 1:01pm

Re: Samajh jana keh wo mai hoon!!!

:k: wonderful poem

aabla_pa · April 24, 2007, 1:05pm

Re: Samajh jana keh wo mai hoon!!!

[QUOTE]
Agar hichki koi aaye
Samajh jana keh wo mai hoon
[/QUOTE]

hichki ............. ya
jo hichki zor ki aaey

[QUOTE]
**Magar jab saans tum layina **
Samajh jana keh wo mai hoon!!!
[/QUOTE]

saans ............. ya
thandi saans.

By the way, nice poem :)

EEMAAN · April 24, 2007, 1:17pm

Re: Samajh jana keh wo mai hoon!!!

Thanks decent_fellow and aabla_pa

Lols aabla_pa,,poet knows better abt it,,,waisay hichki zor ki ho ya aahista,,hichki tou hichki hai :-),,,and same thing with saans:)

deep_ocean · April 24, 2007, 2:09pm

Re: Samajh jana keh wo mai hoon!!!

very beautiful poem

Hamnah · April 24, 2007, 2:13pm

Re: Samajh jana keh wo mai hoon!!!

First stanza is the most beautiful one !

MARRIED_NY · April 24, 2007, 2:43pm

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wowwwwwwwww zaberdast,,,

redroses · April 24, 2007, 2:56pm

Re: Samajh jana keh wo mai hoon!!!

awww nice :-)

EEMAAN · April 26, 2007, 4:52am

Re: Samajh jana keh wo mai hoon!!!

Thanks all..

Addie · April 26, 2007, 5:54am

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very nice

moonmine · April 26, 2007, 8:53am

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Zabardast....

Jhanjharewali · April 26, 2007, 11:04am

Re: Samajh jana keh wo mai hoon!!!

so beautiful. thand pay gayee padh ke. thanks.

EEMAAN · April 26, 2007, 12:56pm

Re: Samajh jana keh wo mai hoon!!!

Shukria,,,,lols jhanjerwali :-)

aminas · April 26, 2007, 1:37pm

Re: Samajh jana keh wo mai hoon!!!

very nice :k:

SinlneR · April 26, 2007, 2:55pm

Re: Samajh jana keh wo mai hoon!!!

wowww.. bohot khoob.. too good..
the last lines are the besht..

thanks alot for sharing. !