sama`at ko talab hai wo suna do phir chale jana

Arts & Culture Poetry ( Intikhaab & Sho'ra-e-Gupshup)

Koyal July 19, 2007, 4:51am 1

sakoot-e-jaan ka matlab bata do phir chale jana
ya phir sargoshiya’N dil ki suna do phir chale jana

jo mera or tumhara waqt guzra hansne rone maiN
usay poori tarah se tum bhula do phir chale jana

kisi ko chahne ka aur kisi se chahe jane ka
jo hai ehsaas tum usko bhula do phir chale jana

bus ek hansi se apne ashkon ko chupane ka
jo fun aata hai tum ko wo shikha do phir chale jana

wo jo ek lafz-e-ulfat hai juda hai apne maa’iney se
bus in alfaz-o-maa’iney ko mita do phir chale jana

***jo kehte kehte ruk ga’ye un sari batooN ki
sama`at ko talab hai wo suna do phir chale jana

na jane kyun hai lekin dekhne ki tum ko aadat hai
meri ye be-wajah aadat churha do phir chale jana

merey in roz-O-shab ka ek faQat unwaan bas tum ho
mujhe tum doosra unwaan laa do phir chale jana

Shab-e-Hijar July 19, 2007, 5:23am 2

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you are asking for too much koyal sis no wonder woh bhag raha hai ap ko chor kar

Janaza

SJ July 19, 2007, 5:35am 3

Re: sama`at ko talab hai wo suna do phir chale jana

very nice ...... :)

Amal July 19, 2007, 12:25pm 4

Re: sama`at ko talab hai wo suna do phir chale jana

Koyal bohat hi achi ghazal hey :k: Thanx a lot for sharing it with us

GuL-e-Tasbeeh July 19, 2007, 2:55pm 5

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Koyal:

sakoot-e-jaan ka matlab bata do phir chale jana ya phir sargoshiya'N dil ki suna do phir chale jana jo mera or tumhara waqt guzra hansne rone maiN usay poori tarah se tum bhula do phir chale jana kisi ko chahne ka aur kisi se chahe jane ka jo hai ehsaas tum usko bhula do phir chale jana bus ek hansi se apne ashkon ko chupane ka jo fun aata hai tum ko wo shikha do phir chale jana wo jo ek lafz-e-ulfat hai juda hai apne maa'iney se bus in alfaz-o-maa'iney ko mita do phir chale jana ***jo kehte kehte ruk ga'ye un sari batooN ki *** ***sama`at ko talab hai wo suna do phir chale jana *** na jane kyun hai lekin dekhne ki tum ko aadat hai meri ye be-wajah aadat churha do phir chale jana ***merey in roz-O-shab ka ek faQat unwaan bas tum ho *** ***mujhe tum doosra unwaan laa do phir chale jana***

acha ji hum pehley comment kar dein buhat achi ghazal hey koyal ji tum aa kar mera msg parh lo phir chaley jana:-p

Koyal July 20, 2007, 2:03pm 6

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i guess wo ap ki taha ka ho gha na

Don't throw a baby in the air else .....

Jhanjharewali July 20, 2007, 2:17pm 7

Re: sama`at ko talab hai wo suna do phir chale jana

its very nice Koyal

Koyal July 21, 2007, 3:09am 8

Re: sama`at ko talab hai wo suna do phir chale jana

thanks :)

Koyal July 21, 2007, 3:09am 9

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thanks Amal

Koyal July 21, 2007, 3:11am 10

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aur agar ap ka messge parh k WO yehi ruk gaye tu :p

Koyal July 21, 2007, 3:11am 11

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thanks JW :)

redidentity July 21, 2007, 5:00am 12

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Khoob..

Prince charming......but not

Prince charming......but not

Shab-e-Hijar July 21, 2007, 5:44am 13

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hayeAllah … mai to kahi nahi bhag rahi

nakhan July 21, 2007, 6:55am 14

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aik bohat he achi ghazal... parh k maza aa gaya

thanks koyal ji bus share karti rahain or da'ad leti rahain

muddii July 21, 2007, 8:09am 15

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Koyal:

sakoot-e-jaan ka matlab bata do phir chale jana ya phir sargoshiya'N dil ki suna do phir chale jana jo mera or tumhara waqt guzra hansne rone maiN usay poori tarah se tum bhula do phir chale jana kisi ko chahne ka aur kisi se chahe jane ka jo hai ehsaas tum usko bhula do phir chale jana bus ek hansi se apne ashkon ko chupane ka jo fun aata hai tum ko wo shikha do phir chale jana wo jo ek lafz-e-ulfat hai juda hai apne maa'iney se bus in alfaz-o-maa'iney ko mita do phir chale jana ***jo kehte kehte ruk ga'ye un sari batooN ki *** ***sama`at ko talab hai wo suna do phir chale jana *** na jane kyun hai lekin dekhne ki tum ko aadat hai meri ye be-wajah aadat churha do phir chale jana ***merey in roz-O-shab ka ek faQat unwaan bas tum ho *** ***mujhe tum doosra unwaan laa do phir chale jana***

Tum Qatal Karoo Hoo Kay Karamat Karoo Hoo.............splended choice:)

Koyal July 24, 2007, 4:00am 16

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:)

Koyal July 24, 2007, 4:00am 17

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Koyal July 24, 2007, 4:01am 18

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shukria nkhan:)

Prince_Ali July 24, 2007, 4:44am 19

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very nice :k:

Koyal August 18, 2007, 3:41am 20

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