Salt Rain

Arts & Culture Poetry ( Intikhaab & Sho'ra-e-Gupshup)
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There are no clouds, I’m smiling broken at the blue sky

Flowing from my eyes, falling into the deep
In their glassy stillness I feel your presence
In their pure reflection I see your image
Smiling as I sink into the deep - my last breath bubbles upwards

Swallowing away tears, I doubt you understand
The feeling inside, a soaked heart
Thoughtless, insensitive - you read these wet words
These words - they stain paper once more with salt rain

I know I won’t forget you, but I’ll make your memories my reason to live.

2

very nicely written

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I don't have anything to say - this is pretty deep.

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bery bery touching

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“Dream as if u live forever live as if u will die today”

5

it’s deep all right.

Well written Umar bhai

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Just wanted to say thanx - I guess its a matter of being perceptive and discerning.

7

true - perception and sensitivity go hand in hand, and hence a person like me who doesn't write all that often gets to appreciate thoughts of others.

I'm glad I came across this place and really like the various posts of people's own writings.

i wish to read more of yours - please keep posting.

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yaar uppar say guzar gaaya…

mairay dill mairay mussafir

9

Thanks again for the appreciation MASSTT.

Akif jee, koi baat nahi - shayad samajhney key qaabil hee nahi thee.

10

Akif yaar ab level itna high ho to kia karey

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