}}} Salook -e- Naarwa {{{

Arts & Culture Poetry ( Intikhaab & Sho'ra-e-Gupshup)
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Salook -e- Naarwa ka mein Is liye shikwaa nahi karta

Kyon k mein bhi to kisi baat ki parwaaa nahi kartaa

Bohat hoshiyaar hoon apni laraayee app larta hoon

Mein dil ki baat ko deewaar pey likhaa nahi karta

Agar par jaaye adat aap apney saath rehney ki

Yeh saath aaisa hay k insaan ko TANHA nahi karta

Zameen pairon sey kitni baar din mein Nikalti hai

Mein aisey haadson pey Dil magar chota nahi karta

Tera israar sir aankhon pay ,per tujh ko BHOOL janey ki

Mein koshish karkey daikhon ga magar WAAADA nahi karta

well let’s just say m in a poetik mode 2day :slight_smile:

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Re: }}} Salook -e- Naarwa {{{

[QUOTE]
*Originally posted by Simply Seema: *

Salook -e- Naarwa ka mein Is liye shikwaa nahi karta

Kyon k mein bhi to kisi baat ki parwaaa nahi kartaa

Bohat hoshiyaar hoon apni laraayee app larta hoon

Mein dil ki baat ko deewaar pey likhaa nahi karta

Agar par jaaye adat aap apney saath rehney ki

Yeh saath aaisa hay k insaan ko TANHA nahi karta

Zameen pairon sey kitni baar din mein Nikalti hai

Mein aisey haadson pey Dil magar chota nahi karta

Tera israar sir aankhon pay ,per tujh ko BHOOL janey ki

Mein koshish karkey daikhon ga magar WAAADA nahi karta

well let's just say m in a poetik mode 2day :)
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Sure you are in a poetic mood but practicalism that is refletive in above poem is still there with you. Nice poem BTW, and thanks for sharing :)

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Re: }}} Salook -e- Naarwa {{{

[QUOTE]
*Originally posted by Simply Seema: *

Salook -e- Naarwa ka mein Is liye shikwaa nahi karta

Kyon k mein bhi to kisi baat ki parwaaa nahi kartaa

Bohat hoshiyaar hoon apni laraayee app larta hoon

Mein dil ki baat ko deewaar pey likhaa nahi karta

Agar par jaaye adat aap apney saath rehney ki

Yeh saath aaisa hay k insaan ko TANHA nahi karta

Zameen pairon sey kitni baar din mein Nikalti hai

Mein aisey haadson pey Dil magar chota nahi karta

Tera israar sir aankhon pay ,per tujh ko BHOOL janey ki

Mein koshish karkey daikhon ga magar WAAADA nahi karta

well let's just say m in a poetik mode 2day :)
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Wah...Lovely ...Zabardast Seema...
Bohat aala choice hai yaar aapki...
Thanks for sharing...

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simply great....

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Re: }}} Salook -e- Naarwa {{{

[QUOTE]
*Originally posted by Simply Seema: *

Salook -e- Naarwa ka mein Is liye shikwaa nahi karta

Kyon k mein bhi to kisi baat ki parwaaa nahi kartaa

Bohat hoshiyaar hoon apni laraayee app larta hoon

Mein dil ki baat ko deewaar pey likhaa nahi karta

Agar par jaaye adat aap apney saath rehney ki

Yeh saath aaisa hay k insaan ko TANHA nahi karta

Zameen pairon sey kitni baar din mein Nikalti hai

Mein aisey haadson pey Dil magar chota nahi karta

Tera israar sir aankhon pay ,per tujh ko BHOOL janey ki

Mein koshish karkey daikhon ga magar WAAADA nahi karta

well let's just say m in a poetik mode 2day :)
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Wah..simple and straight
lovely choice.....keep it up

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**Agar par jaaye adat aap apney saath rehney ki

Yeh saath aaisa hay k insaan ko TANHA nahi karta**

woww its realy coolllllllllll thanks for sharying :):)

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hmm

Gud :)

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yeh ghazal bhi bohut he aala hai:k::k: