salamz.
i’m a new member here.
kuch share karna chahongi
Vo loag bahot khush-kismat they
Jo ishq ko kaam samajhtay they
Ya kaam say aashqi kertay they
Hum jeetay jee musroof rahay
Kuch Ishq kia kuch kaam kia
Kaam ishq kay array aata raha
Aur ishq kaam say ulujhta raha
Aakhir tung aa ker hum nei(n)
Donoo(n) ko udhoora choorr dia.
Wah…one of my fav :k:
b/w Welcome Pehli Kiran…cute nick 
thanks for sharing
wellcome :)
wah.. bhoot khoob.. aur kuch irshaad karna passand karin ge ap?
by the way.. nick bhoot he pyara hai ap ka..
welcome 1 kiran je 
nice poem:):k:
khush amdeed ! thanks 4 sharing :)
nice
Ver nice and just to say welcome....
Khuda karay ka ya kiran
Suraj ke pahlee kirna ne tarah hoo
Jasay
Suraj ke pahlee kiran ahista ahista
Apni rooshnee ko brahatee jatee hi
Usi taraha aap behi
Chamaktee rahoo..
Khuda khush rakhay...
Thankoo Everybody :)
welcome kiran
HI 
welcome
btw, nice poem :k:
acha kia kisi or nay bhi aadhoori ko us ki badzooqi ki waja say aadhoora choR dia tha
Welcome :k: kkkkkkkkk kkk kiran
nice poem kiran, and welcome to this forum, I am also kind of new here,but people around are so loveing and careing that no one feels AJNABEE here, like see !!! how Azad sb is appreciating me…
Thanks Azad sb…
Jaab mainay post kiya tha ka Azad page pare he nahi koyee nahi bola… aab pata chal raha hai ka andar say sub kitnay khush hain… Aur khush behi pura pura… Adhoora bahi nahi…
Kidahar hai Azad… anay doo us koo 
Hamari (forum ke) Adhoori ko us nay pura pura appreciate kiya hai… 
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*Originally posted by aadhoorighazal: *
nice poem kiran, and welcome to this forum, I am also kind of new here,but people around are so loveing and careing that no one feels AJNABEE here, like see !!! how Azad sb is appreciating me..............
Thanks Azad sb............
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PaRhaii aadhoori choR di
Safaii aadhoori choR di
Dhulaii aadhoori choR di
PaRosan say laRaii aadhoori choR di
our to our
Logon ki buraii aadhoori choR di
our again
bongiyaan marnay
Challllllllll JhaRRRRu Lagaa
Adab Arz
(Azad)
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:D
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*Originally posted by guybrush: *
:D
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Azad theek kahta hai...
Tuuuu Truck kay neechay away hee away.... :)
wah bhai is waqt to saray ikhtilafaat door ho gaye hain aap aur azad mein … donoon ne mere khilaaf kahaz khool lia ha 
bohtu khoob:k::k:
welcome:wave:
ws and welcome to GS
nice poem
thanx everybody :~)