salam every one

Arts & Culture Poetry ( Intikhaab & Sho'ra-e-Gupshup)
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salam every one i´m very new here and i wanna share with u my collection. i hope u like it too .
paa-ba-gil sab hain rihaaii kii kare tadabiir kaun
dast-bastaa shahar main khole merii zanjiir kaun

meraa sar haazir hai lekin meraa munsif dekh le
kar rahaa hai mere fard-e-jurm kii tahariir kaun

aaj darvaazon pe dastak jaani pahachaani si hai
aaj mere naam laataa hai merii taaziir kaun

ret abhii pichhale makanon kii na vaapas aaii thii
phir lab-e-saahil gharaundaa kar gayaa taamiir kaun

saare rishte hijraton main saath dete hain to phir
sehar se jaate hue hotaa hai daaman_giir kaun

dushmanon ke saath mere dost bhii aazaad hain
dekhna hai khenchta hai mujh pe pehala teer kaun

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Re: salam every one

Buhut khub Sajeela! Very nicely written. :k:

Welcome to Gupshup

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Re: salam every one

very very nice tahreer ki hay wah
Khush Aamdeed
waisay to mein bhi new hoon

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Re: salam every one

Nhangeyaao! => Welcome ! ** ;-]**

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welcome !! hope u will carry on to this cute forum and keep sharing like abov caho carez

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Re: salam every one

Buhat khoob....kaafee mushkil alfaaz hain :p

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Very nice collection. Thanx for sharing it with us. And welcome to GS Sajeela

>>> Colours & Moods <<<
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nice collection sajeela ...keep it up ..........

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Welcome with a good collection...

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{{ret abhii pichhale makanon kii na vaapas aaii thii
phir lab-e-saahil gharaundaa kar gayaa taamiir kaun

saare rishte hijraton main saath dete hain to phir
sehar se jaate hue hotaa hai daaman_giir kaun }}

a warm welcome to this forum yes we will defintly like 2 read ur collection keep shairing :)