Salaam Every1

Salaam
How is everybody here?
I am new here…just wanted to say hello and wanted to share a poem with u all.
I love shairi so whoever has something, please do share it with me.


inn jheel si gehri aankhon mein ik shaam kaheen aabaad tu ho
uss jheel kinraya pal do pal
ik khwab ka neela phool khilay!
woh phool baha dein lehro.n mein
ik roz kabhi ham shaam dhalay
uss phool ke behtay rango.n mein
jis wakt larazta chand chalay!
uss wakt kaheen in ankho.n mein uss bisray pal ki yaad tu ho!
inn jheel si gehri ankho.n mein ik shaam kahee.n aabaad tu ho!
phir chahay umr-e-samandar ki
har mauj presha.n ho jaiy!
phir chahay aankh dareechay se
har khwab gureza.n ho jaiy!
phir chahay phool k chehray ka
har dard numaya.n ho jaiy!
iss jheel kinaray pal do pal woh roop nagar eejaad tu ho!
din raat k iss aaeenay se woh aks kabhi aazaad tu ho!
inn jheel si gehri ankho.n mein ik shaam kaheen aabaad tu ho!
(amjad islam amjad)

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welcome to GS :wave:

nice poem :slight_smile:

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Thanks Sis :)

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mashallah nice poem!

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nice one.....n welcome to GS :).

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MM & Crescent thanks for the welcome and also for tareef of my intekhab :)

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Very Nice… Tnx for sharing… :slight_smile:

And… Buhut Buhut Welcome to GS specialy GS Poetry Club :flower1:

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GS....bohot bohot shukriya...seems like u r into shairi too so when am i going to read ur intekhab here on gupshup???? I hope pretty soon :)

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/\ I post here regularly… Few days back I posted a Poem by FARAZ… I will post One today as well… :slight_smile:
And I have posted my own Poem too… few days back… :blush:

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Salamz !! welcome to GS. Enjoy ur stay here
very nice sharing :slight_smile:

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Ahsan225! thanks a bunch. And GS....could u pleaz tell me whats the topic of the thread where u posted ur own poem....i dont have time right now otherwise, i would have tried to find out myself. Good to know that u write poems....its great :)

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*Un jheel si gehri aankhoN meiN.. ek shaam kahiN abaad to ho *

One of my favs... :-) Thanks for sharing :-)

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Welcome....

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Welcome aboard Red_Cherry. Hope you have a nice time here :)

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Khamosh Nigahein, Dilsay ans Amal....thank u all for the warm welcome.

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Wow...RC itni achi nazam se shuruaat ki hae...welcome to poetry forum :)

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Hi bholi bhali!

How r u?
Thanx for tareef....i'll be posting more soon:)

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Bohat khoob Red_Cherry …and welcome to GS…:flower2:

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nice poem.....** RC**