Sakoot-e-dil...

Daanie · April 1, 2008, 8:35am

Sakoot-e-dil tho jazeera hai barf ka lekin
Tera khuloos hai sooraj ke saayebaan ki tarha

Main ik khwaab sahi, aap ki amaanat hoon
Mujhe sambhaal ke rakhiye ga jism-o-jaan ki tarha

Kabhi tho soch ke woh shakhs kis qadar tha buland
Jo bichh gaya tere qadmon mein aasmaan ki tarha

Bulaa rahaa hai mujhe phir kisi badan ka basant
Guzar na jaaye ye rut bhi kahin khizaan ki tarha

Shumaisa · April 1, 2008, 9:02am

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Nice..

Jhanjharewali · April 1, 2008, 9:15am

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**ahan Daanie very nice. graphic at bottom nice too **

S.786 · April 1, 2008, 12:48pm

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v.......good :)

Aryaan · April 1, 2008, 10:31pm

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Bohat khoob Daanie..:k:

Precious_Khan · April 2, 2008, 10:56pm

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Buhat Aala :~)

being_lonely · April 3, 2008, 7:26am

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Khizaan kI tarah wah umda daanie :k:

bheegiyaad · April 3, 2008, 2:05pm

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nice one

NikamiJano · April 3, 2008, 3:50pm

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V nice dannie and braf k tukray @ bottom look good too :)

Daanie · April 9, 2008, 6:56am

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thanks for replies everyone

abeeha · April 9, 2008, 7:30am

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** Kabhi tho soch ke woh shakhs kis qadar tha buland
Jo bichh gaya tere qadmon mein aasmaan ki tarha

very nice Daanie:k:
**

Daanie · April 14, 2008, 8:57am

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thanks much