Saharay........... On completion of my 3K

Dilsay · March 17, 2003, 6:36pm

I wanted to write something to complete my 3 K

**Kitni door aagiya tari yaad kay saharay
Aur kitni door jana hai tari yaad kay saharay

Mara din behi guzrata hai tari yaad kay saharay
Mari raat behi hai guzri tari yaad kay saharay

Manzil behi hoo gee naseeb tu hosla tu kar
Mari taraha tu chal kisi yaad kay saharay

Tara dil he rah numa hai tara dill he mahraban hai
Koyoon jeeoun main phir kis aur kay saharay

Mainay kaha na tha tum say ya raah hai kathain
Koyoon choortay ho aab tum kisi aur kay saharay

Tu nay bhula diya par ya behi yaad rakhna
Main behi bhula he doon ga tujahay taray he saharay**

by Dilsay

Man_de_Mouj · March 17, 2003, 6:44pm

Re: Saharay........... On completion of my 3K

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*Originally posted by Dilsay: *
I wanted to write something to complete my 3 K

**Kitni door aagiya tari yaad kay saharay
Aur kitni door jana hai tari yaad kay saharay

Mara din behi guzrata hai tari yaad kay saharay
Mari raat behi hai guzri tari yaad kay saharay

Manzil behi hoo gee naseeb tu hosla tu kar
Mari taraha tu chal kisi yaad kay saharay

Tara dil he rah numa hai tara dill he mahraban hai
Koyoon jeeoun main phir kis aur kay saharay

Mainay kaha na tha tum say ya raah hai kathain
Koyoon choortay ho aab tum kisi aur kay saharay

Tu nay bhula diya par ya behi yaad rakhna
Main behi bhula he doon ga tujahay taray he saharay**

by Dilsay
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beautiful Dilsay.....bohat acha....and lots of congrats

ullujii · March 17, 2003, 7:10pm

WONDERFULL :k:

aur ap co 3k par mubarak ho

Amal · March 17, 2003, 7:36pm

Re: Saharay… On completion of my 3K

Dilsay it’s a beautiful ghazal:k:…Good job:) thanx for sharing and may congratulations on your 3K:)

chand_chehra · March 17, 2003, 9:45pm

very nice dilsay :k: keep up the good work
N congratz on your 3k

ghazal_kisi_ke · March 17, 2003, 10:50pm

excellent job:k::k::k:
thanks for sharing:~)
and congratz on ur 3K:k:

Dilsay · March 18, 2003, 4:55am

Same to you too Mubarak hoo aap ko behi 3K par

Azad · March 18, 2003, 8:30am

Dilsay 3 Mobarak ho our GKK aap ko bhi

GuL-e-Tasbeeh · March 18, 2003, 1:19pm

Congratulation on your 3k,and Thanks for sharing Nice Poetry Keep it up.

Philanthrope · March 18, 2003, 3:20pm

Re: Saharay… On completion of my 3K

Wah…Lovely! & Congrats on your 3k :k:

ghazal_kisi_ke · March 19, 2003, 1:43am

apke mubarekbad hamein late pohnche hai:snooty:
anyways thanks a lot for saying:)

Azad thanks and u r late too:snooty:

Dilsay · March 19, 2003, 5:27am

kiya karain…

Paglee · March 19, 2003, 12:58pm

nice one dil se aur cong for ur 3k..:)..

Dilsay · March 19, 2003, 3:46pm

_Masoom_Muskaan · March 19, 2003, 4:26pm

Dilsay · March 19, 2003, 4:34pm

Sorry and thanks for pointing it out… greatful

Guest7777 · March 19, 2003, 5:31pm

sorry dilsay reply thora later ker rehi hon but kehtai hai na dair ayad durst ayad aur soemthing is better than nothing so here is that something lots and lots of mubarakbad to you … poem was also nice good job :k:

Dilsay · March 19, 2003, 5:34pm

Thankis a lot…

guybrush · March 19, 2003, 6:16pm

nice and congrats for ur 3k :)

Dilsay · March 19, 2003, 6:27pm

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*Originally posted by guybrush: *
nice and congrats for ur 3k :)
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Thanks