SafaR akelay kaat lu ge mae ne pocha tu ru para wo...

HeArT_HaCKeR · September 9, 2004, 3:53pm

NazR mein zulmat, badn mein thunduk, jamaal kitna ajeeb sa tha
Mae terii chahat mien ghar se nikla tu haal kitna ajeeb sa tha

Na mae ne us ko khatoot likhay na us ne meri panaah chahii
Khud apni apni jagah pe hum ko malaal kitna ajeeb sa tha

Na janay kaise nayee rutoN mien puranii yaadoN ki naou doobi
NazR k darya mien aanay wala ubaal kitna ajeeb sa tha

HatheliyoN pe rakhay chiraghoN ko khud bhujaya hawa se pehle
Udaas mosum mien be-basii ka ye saal kitna ajeeb sa tha

SafaR akelay kaat lu ge mae ne pocha tu ru para wo
Jawab kitna ajeeb sa tha, sawaal kitna ajeeb sa tha

*Najm-us-SaQib

**

Samad · September 9, 2004, 4:32pm

suwaad a geya sohneyo

Pramod · September 9, 2004, 4:34pm

wah..kya ghazal hai. har sher achha laga. Once again a great choice to share.
Thanks ** HeArT HaCKeR sahiba **.

HeArT_HaCKeR · September 9, 2004, 4:36pm

lol..

Pramod bhaiyya thankoooo :).. ab tu mujhe apni threadz mein ap k reply ka intezaar hota hai.. hehe.. thanks for liking . .

Pyara_sa_doost · September 9, 2004, 9:21pm

uhhh wow heart thanx to shair with us wow bohat ache bol hein alfaz hein is mein gr8 stuff

khas tor pe yeh

Na mae ne us ko khatoot likhay na us ne meri panaah chahii
Khud apni apni jagah pe hum ko malaal kitna ajeeb sa tha

keep posting sweet and nice choice :)

tata:)

Koyal · September 10, 2004, 12:37am

nice one Hh :)

chand_chehra · September 10, 2004, 3:52am

nice :k:

SunnyBoy · September 10, 2004, 8:09am

:k:

Maheen2002 · September 10, 2004, 9:26am

Re: SafaR akelay kaat lu ge mae ne pocha tu ru para wo…

Zabardast

HeArT_HaCKeR · September 10, 2004, 9:45am

[QUOTE]
*Originally posted by Pyara sa doost: *
uhhh wow heart thanx to shair with us wow bohat ache bol hein alfaz hein is mein gr8 stuff

khas tor pe yeh

Na mae ne us ko khatoot likhay na us ne meri panaah chahii
Khud apni apni jagah pe hum ko malaal kitna ajeeb sa tha

keep posting sweet and nice choice :)

tata:)
[/QUOTE]

thanks pyaara sa dost :)

HeArT_HaCKeR · September 10, 2004, 9:46am

*Koyal.. chanduu.. sunny uncle.. maheenu * shukran . ..

WiseGuy · September 10, 2004, 1:09pm

Nice! HHuuuuu :k:

HeArT_HaCKeR · September 10, 2004, 2:18pm

thanks Wisuuuuuuuuu

NyFella · September 10, 2004, 2:28pm

adaab

wa wa written beautifully heartuu

HeArT_HaCKeR · September 10, 2004, 5:15pm

thankzz fellu.. waisay ye meri apnii nahi hai :p

X_Communist · September 10, 2004, 6:46pm

HH..its beautiful.. :k: thanks for sharing.

re: that pm of urs…well may yeh keh rahi thi kay agar ap kay pass cassette ya cd’s available nahi hai to i can fed ex one over

HeArT_HaCKeR · September 10, 2004, 8:53pm

thanks for liking communist..

well yar.. mae online hee ganay suntii hoon.. cassettes/ cds kabhi nahi lee.. thanks anyways . . .

ghazal_kisi_ke · September 11, 2004, 1:10am

Re: SafaR akelay kaat lu ge mae ne pocha tu ru para wo…

WOWWWWWW .. im speechless .. her sher khoobsorat hai .. tumehin kahan say milte hai aise cheezein ..*jealous* .. khair just loved it .. thanx a bunch for sharing .. n keep sharing your collection plz .. always enjoy reading your posts .. always your posts touch my heart .. always there is something deep n sad .. khair i think its enough to encourage you .. two thumbz wayyyyyyy up .. ..

Nazi83 · September 11, 2004, 1:46am

very niceeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee amazing, har lafz dil ku laga ....buht khoob

HeArT_HaCKeR · September 11, 2004, 8:58am

Re: Re: SafaR akelay kaat lu ge mae ne pocha tu ru para wo…

awww… thats sho nice of u ghazaluu thankoo … aur ghazals tu hameesha mujhe mukhtalif magazines se hee milteen hien …thanks again

Nazii83 thankooo ..