SadaeiN deti heiN har simt sey balaaeiN mujhey

Arts & Culture Poetry ( Intikhaab & Sho'ra-e-Gupshup)

Amal July 7, 2007, 2:12pm 1

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SadaeiN deti heiN har simt sey balaaeiN mujhey
wo jaatey jaatey ajab dey gaya sazaeiN mujhey

jo abr barsa to misaal-e-gard beitth gaya
jamey na paaoN ke phir ley urriiN hawaeiN mujhey

wo chara’gar merey zakhmoN ko chairrney wala
dawaa ko chorr kar deiney laga duwaeiN mujhey

dyaar-e-yaar terey subh-o-shaam khoob magar
meiN kya karooN jo teri ronaqeiN na bhaeiN mujhey

meiN sang-e-raah to nahi hooN magar ta’aajub hey
ke aatey jaatey sabhi thokarreiN lagaaeiN mujhey

meiN wo makaan hooN jo aag ki lapeit meiN hey
kaho makeenoN sey “Ruhi” ke chorr jaaeiN mujhey**

redidentity July 7, 2007, 2:45pm 2

Re: SadaeiN deti heiN har simt sey balaaeiN mujhey

It is Awesome Wholy..

mariam July 7, 2007, 5:18pm 3

Re: SadaeiN deti heiN har simt sey balaaeiN mujhey

*** ~Nice~

bohat achi gazal hay***

SJ July 8, 2007, 11:02am 4

Re: SadaeiN deti heiN har simt sey balaaeiN mujhey

Bohat Khoobsorat Ghazal Hai...
Thanx For Sharing!!!
:)

BeyondHorizon July 8, 2007, 12:01pm 5

Re: SadaeiN deti heiN har simt sey balaaeiN mujhey

Bohat Khoobsorat Ghazal

Prince_Ali July 8, 2007, 1:13pm 6

Re: SadaeiN deti heiN har simt sey balaaeiN mujhey

very nice Amal bhai :k:

NikamiJano July 9, 2007, 2:59am 7

Re: SadaeiN deti heiN har simt sey balaaeiN mujhey

**jo abr barsa to misaal-e-gard beitth gaya
jamey na paaoN ke phir ley urriiN hawaeiN mujhey

wo chara'gar merey zakhmoN ko chairrney wala
dawaa ko chorr kar deiney laga duwaeiN mujhey

dyaar-e-yaar terey subh-o-shaam khoob magar
meiN kya karooN jo teri ronaqeiN na bhaeiN mujhey**
v nice Aymal thanks for sharing with us doRoon ka bhi kalam :p

babri July 9, 2007, 8:46am 8

Re: SadaeiN deti heiN har simt sey balaaeiN mujhey

bout khoob bohut hi alaa gazal hai.
very nice.

Jhanjharewali July 9, 2007, 11:07am 9

Re: SadaeiN deti heiN har simt sey balaaeiN mujhey

dyaar-e-yaar terey subh-o-shaam khoob magar
meiN kya karooN jo teri ronaqeiN na bhaeiN mujhey

ye baat kuch zyada achee lagi Amal, waese toh saari ghazal achi thi :)

Amal July 9, 2007, 1:09pm 10

Re: SadaeiN deti heiN har simt sey balaaeiN mujhey

Thanx everyone for liking the ghazal :)

Shab-e-Hijar July 9, 2007, 5:23pm 11

Re: SadaeiN deti heiN har simt sey balaaeiN mujhey

very nice :k:

EEMAAN July 9, 2007, 5:26pm 12

Re: SadaeiN deti heiN har simt sey balaaeiN mujhey

Nice ghazal..

Daanie July 9, 2007, 7:05pm 13

Re: SadaeiN deti heiN har simt sey balaaeiN mujhey

buhut khoob :)