sad poem :(

Princess_Fiona · October 28, 2005, 3:11am

Ok one day my prince charming will write this
nahi Allah na karay.. ..

Youn Hi Tanhai Main Hum Dil Ko Saza Dete Hain

Naam Likhte Hain Tera,Likh Khe Mita Detay Hain

Jab Bhi Nakam Mohabbat Kah Koi Zikar Kare

Loog Hanste Hain - Mera Naam Bata Detay Hain

Ab Khushi Ki Koi Tarkeeb Nah Sooche Duniya

Ab Ye Alam Hay Keh Kuch Gham Hi Maza Dete Hain

Ab Tasalli Nahin Di Jati Mareez-E-Gham Koh

Dekhne Wale Bhi Marne Ki Dua Dete Hain

Kia Zaroorat Hay K Barq Ko Yeh Zehmat Ho

Lao Hum Khud Hi Nasheman Ko Jala Dete Hain<O:p</O:p

ahm4me · October 28, 2005, 3:29am

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Nice one,

Friend4u4ever

saroo · October 28, 2005, 7:51am

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BB i must say at your age you should be reading more cheerful stuff....................anyway its good

saroo · October 28, 2005, 9:19am

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Dont know why this reminds me of a sheer

aankh se aankh milaa baat banaataa kyuun hai
tu agar mujhase Khafaa hai to chhupaataa kyuun hai
Gair lagataa hai na apanonn kii tarah milataa hai
tu zamaane kii tarah mujhako sataataa kyuun hai

Precious_Khan · October 28, 2005, 9:42am

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............................kiya kahoon is umer main yeh lachchan achchay naheen bibi hosh k nakhun lo aur kuch achcha parr liya karooo yeh to hum jaisay logoon ki poem hay jo 25 saal k ho chukay hoon aur phir bhee akailay hoon :)

Princess_Fiona · October 28, 2005, 1:18pm

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^ my dear PK.. aysay poems parnay kaylay age ki zaroorat nahi hay :)
as some dumb ppl say that love doesnt look at age.. yeah bas hojata hay na.. to aysay hee shairi ka zoq yah sad poems kisi age to nahi daykta .. bas dad daynay walo ko daykta hay.. aur jis nay ak martaba dad di to woh sad poem us ki zindagee ban jatee hay .. hope u get it :)

Princess_Fiona · October 28, 2005, 1:20pm

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may i know why? have u ever seen me posting any happy poem… i told u once before and iam telling u now again… poem may agar ghum na ho to poem ka maza hee nahi hota.. aur about age.. then may to aysay hee ho.. cant change myself

ghazel_rizvi · October 29, 2005, 7:11am

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attia ya itni udasi kun hey bhe keep smiling larki ur prince charming will give u alot of love name likha to jayga mager mitay ga nahe hope so

MuteStorm · October 29, 2005, 6:26pm

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Kia Zaroorat Hay K Barq Ko Yeh Zehmat Ho
Lao Hum Khud Hi Nasheman Ko Jala Dete Hain

bht khoob janab :)!!

nakhan · October 29, 2005, 6:33pm

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Wah bhi Attia zabardast...

*Ab Khushi Ki Koi Tarkeeb Nah Sooche Duniya *
*Ab Ye Alam Hay Keh Kuch Gham Hi Maza Dete Hain *

Kia Zaroorat Hay K Barq Ko Yeh Zehmat Ho **
**Lao Hum Khud Hi Nasheman Ko Jala Dete Hain

Princess_Fiona · October 30, 2005, 5:28am

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yaar aj kal sacha dost mushkil say milta hay.. ap sachay ashiq kee bat kar rahay ho

Princess_Fiona · October 30, 2005, 5:30am

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thanks for liking it

Princess_Fiona · October 30, 2005, 5:31am

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chalo apko pasand agee .. that is all that matters

Golden_Scorpion_1 · October 30, 2005, 8:46am

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Wah… I mean.. Wah Wah… Its Beautiful… Tnx Attia