~* Sacha Jeevan *~

Philanthrope · January 4, 2004, 3:48pm

Sochti hon... Shehron main moti moti deevarain hoti hain.. Aur unkay beech baray baray darvazay Aur un darvazon per.. Motay aur dabeez parday.. Dil ka haal kon , kis ko aur kaise sunae..?

Jahan asli phool qabron per daltay hon…
Aur naqli phool guldanon ki zeenat bantay hon..
Tu sachi mehkaar ghar kay maqeenon ko kaise aae..?

Sajan!!
Mujhay mitti kay gharoonday main hi basnay do
Jahan gili mitti phool se mehkaar day..
Jahan koyal kook sajan ka sandhyaar day..
Jahan faaslay hon na dorian..

Jahan suhaag kay joray Phenyle ki golian na pehanti hon
Jahan khushyan ahh na banti hon..
Jahan tum main .. “Main” hi rehti hon..

**
By..
Ambreen Qureshi
( Philanthrope )**

Capricorn · January 4, 2004, 4:04pm

Wah
The analogy is impressing and the theme is convincing. Lafzon kee rawanee aur soch ka tasalsul bhee buhat umda hai :k:

Azad · January 4, 2004, 6:44pm

hummm maza nahi aya

JonyBr · January 4, 2004, 9:49pm

U just keep getting better & better

Zabardast

AQ · January 5, 2004, 1:16am

very zabar10 philanthrope

marvelous..

tau aap ab iss dafaa bhee sochaiN gey yaa naheeN?

cuteepie · January 5, 2004, 1:50am

:k:

JonyBr · January 5, 2004, 2:50am

Nahi ab mein thak gaya shes too good

AQ · January 5, 2004, 2:51am

aaindah hans kee chaal naa chalnaa

j/k .. i think u should ‘think’

ghazal_kisi_ke · January 5, 2004, 5:03am

awesome:k::k:

thanx for sharing:flower1:

system · January 5, 2004, 10:13am

beautiful, bohat khobsurat hai.. :)

system · January 5, 2004, 10:47am

BrokenSky · January 5, 2004, 12:10pm

Dracko · January 5, 2004, 5:42pm

abbay yaar!!! kia factory lagai hoi hai

shar pe shar nikaltay hain

nikii · January 10, 2004, 5:29pm

Re: ~* Sacha Jeevan *~

[QUOTE]
*Originally posted by Philanthrope: *

Sochti hon...
Shehron main moti moti deevarain hoti hain..
Aur unkay beech baray baray darvazay
Aur un darvazon per..
Motay aur dabeez parday..
Dil ka haal kon , kis ko aur kaise sunae..?

Jahan asli phool qabron per daltay hon...
Aur naqli phool guldanon ki zeenat bantay hon..
Tu sachi mehkaar ghar kay maqeenon ko kaise aae..?

Sajan!!
Mujhay mitti kay gharoonday main hi basnay do
Jahan gili mitti phool se mehkaar day..
Jahan koyal kook sajan ka sandhyaar day..
Jahan faaslay hon na dorian..

Jahan suhaag kay joray Phenyle ki golian na pehanti hon
Jahan khushyan ahh na banti hon..
Jahan tum main .. "Main" hi rehti hon..

**
By..
Ambreen Qureshi
( Philanthrope )**
[/QUOTE]

zaberdasttttt :)

chodhry · January 10, 2004, 7:46pm

Re: ~* Sacha Jeevan *~

bohat acha theme lagga es ka aur punch line ki delivery is realy good chaa gye ho aap :k:
thanks for sharing

bilalsohaib · January 10, 2004, 8:25pm

jal rahey ho kya…

Dracko · January 12, 2004, 8:14am

abbay O jalti to meri joti bhi nahi hai

main to yeh keh raha hoon ke itni jaldi jaldi nazmain beh rahihain in ke moonh se :moocking:

Swera · January 12, 2004, 2:12pm

:k:

Amarbail1 · January 12, 2004, 6:36pm

Really impressive …:k: Keep it up
Thanks for sharing Ambreen

smilly · January 14, 2004, 12:46pm

Re: ~* Sacha Jeevan *~

Beautiful:k:

zaberdest…thx for sharing