Sabz Mausam Main Mujhe Zard Hawa Di Uss Ne..

Arts & Culture Poetry ( Intikhaab & Sho'ra-e-Gupshup)

redidentity January 18, 2008, 9:24am 1

Aik Ghazal,

Wo Jo Mehka To Meri Shaakh Jala Di Uss Ne
Sabz Mausam Main Mujhe Zard Hawa Di Uss Ne

Pehlay Aik Lamhay Ki Zanjeer Se Baandha Mujh Ko
Aur Phir Waqt Ki Raftaar Barha Di Uss Ne

Jaanta Tha Ke Mujhe Maut Sukoon Bakhshay Gi
Wo Sitamgar Tha Jo Jeenay Ki Duaa Di Uss Ne

Uss Ke Honay Se Theen Saansain Meri Dugni Shayad
Wo Jo Bichhra To Meri Umrr Ghata Di Uss Ne

Umeed Hai Aap Logon Ko Pasand Aye Gi..

Regards,

Ali_2 January 18, 2008, 9:31am 2

Re: Sabz Mausam Main Mujhe Zard Hawa Di Uss Ne..

buhat khoob :k:

~ *►*~ Saray Punjabi are Tharki ~*◄*~

hiba_no.1 January 18, 2008, 12:43pm 3

Re: Sabz Mausam Main Mujhe Zard Hawa Di Uss Ne..

nice

bheegiyaad January 18, 2008, 12:51pm 4

Re: Sabz Mausam Main Mujhe Zard Hawa Di Uss Ne..

nice hai

Wailon Ke Sardar IS ko 65k Mubarik hun

deadsoul January 18, 2008, 1:04pm 5

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beautiful

Aaj Kiss Baat Par Gussa Aaya ??????

babri January 18, 2008, 1:15pm 6

Re: Sabz Mausam Main Mujhe Zard Hawa Di Uss Ne..

NiCe oNe janab.

Daanie January 18, 2008, 1:20pm 7

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wonderful sharing :)

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redidentity January 18, 2008, 4:16pm 8

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aap sab ka buhat shukria :)

HeArT_HaCKeR January 18, 2008, 4:30pm 9

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beautiful

thx for sharing :)

m.a.d.i.h.a January 18, 2008, 4:49pm 10

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it's wonderful
awsome sharing

NikamiJano January 19, 2008, 3:09am 11

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Beautiful sharing red :)

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Dushwari January 19, 2008, 4:03am 12

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very nice poem, Ahmer.

redidentity January 19, 2008, 8:00am 13

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aadaab :)

P_G January 19, 2008, 9:17am 14

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[QUOTE]

Jaanta Tha Ke Mujhe Maut Sukoon Bakhshay Gi
Wo Sitamgar Tha Jo Jeenay Ki Duaa Di Uss Ne

[/QUOTE]

hmmmmmmmmm

Jhanjharewali January 20, 2008, 10:21am 15

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very very very nice Ahmer

♥♥♥♥♥♥ I am getting married ♥♥♥♥♥♥

redidentity January 20, 2008, 2:37pm 16

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thnx alot PG n JJW :)