Sabse khatarnak hota hai

LP · January 22, 2014, 10:41pm

Ethan_Hunt · January 22, 2014, 10:44pm

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Clockwork Orange?

LP · January 22, 2014, 11:25pm

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Ji ?

Ethan_Hunt · January 22, 2014, 11:36pm

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Clockwork Orange ka poster hai shayari ke peche.
Waise achi shayari/nazam thi.

LP · January 23, 2014, 12:02am

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I have no idea what clockwork orange is. That's why I didn't get you.
Yep, its a nice poem. I'm glad you liked it :)

Ethan_Hunt · January 23, 2014, 12:04am

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So it's a nazam.

LP · January 23, 2014, 12:10am

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No idea :no:
Kul tuk koe na koe bata he deyga if its a nazam or not.

muqawwee123 · January 23, 2014, 5:28am

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different :k:

LP · January 23, 2014, 8:24am

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Ye nazam hai ?

muqawwee123 · January 23, 2014, 8:41am

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yes. azad nazm keh sakte hain

_Masoom_Muskaan · January 23, 2014, 8:45am

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Nice :k:

Nain · January 23, 2014, 2:57pm

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sab se khaternaak huta hai murda shani sey bhar jana
ye samjh ajaye bus

muqawwee123 · January 23, 2014, 3:28pm

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murda shanti se bhar jana.. chup lag jana.. waise agar yun padhen

sab se khatarnaak hota hai murda…

mahool · January 23, 2014, 3:29pm

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Mujhy to parhny main dushwari horahi hia...koi isko type kar dey...

Nain · January 23, 2014, 3:39pm

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ghar se nikalna kaam per our lout ke ghaar anaa ..sach mae sab se mushkil huta hia raste mae bus mae neend arahi huti hai

or khuw’aab ka mar jana nahi ninni mae khuw’aab arahe hutey hain gudd wali nninni

mahool · January 23, 2014, 3:44pm

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lagta hai abhi bhi nini hi aarahi hia… yeh comment TP ka tha… iss thread main kiya kar raha hai

Nain · January 23, 2014, 3:52pm

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oper pherien it is a part of the poem

mahool · January 23, 2014, 3:53pm

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post 14

Nain · January 23, 2014, 4:08pm

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Mere passs time nahi hai or wo bhi likhne ka nahi hai

LP · January 23, 2014, 5:30pm

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Lijiye :)

Mehnat ki loot sabse khatarnak nahi hoti,
Police ki maar sabse khatarnak nahi hoti,
Gaddari, lobh ki mutthi sabse khatarnak nahi hoti.
Baithe bithaye pakde jana bura to hai,
Sahmi si chhup me jakde jana bura to hai,
Par sabse khatarnak nahi hoti.
Sabse khatarnak hota hai murda shanti se bhar jana,
Na hona tadap ka, sab kuch sahan kar jana,
Ghar se nikalna kaam par, aur kaam se loutkar ghar aana,
Sabse khatarnak hota hai,
Hamare sapno ka mar jana.