sabhii kuchh hai teraa diyaa huaa

Arts & Culture Poetry ( Intikhaab & Sho'ra-e-Gupshup)

Bholay_Bisray October 31, 2007, 9:56am 1

sabhii kuchh hai teraa diyaa huaa sabhii raahate.n sabhii kalafate.n
kabhii sohabate.n kabhii furqate.n kabhii duuriyaa.N kabhii qurbate.n

ye suKhan jo ham ne raqam kiye ye hai.n sab varaq terii yaad ke
ko_ii lamhaa subah-e-visaal kaa, ka_ii shaam-e-hijr kii qurbate.n

jo tumhaarii maan le.n naasihaa to rahegaa daaman-e-dil me.n kyaa
na kisii uduu kii adaavate.n na kisii sanam kii muravvate.n

chalo aao tum ko dikhaaye.N ham jo bachaa hai maqtal -e-shahar me.n
ye mazaar ahal-e-safaa ke hai.n ye hai.n ahal-e-sidq kii turbate.n

merii jaan aaj kaa Gam na kar, ke naa jaane kaatib-e-vaqt ne
kisii apane kal me.n bhii bhuul kar kahii.n likh rakhii ho masarrate.n

Shumaisa October 31, 2007, 11:32am 2

Re: sabhii kuchh hai teraa diyaa huaa

Nice.. :k:

Ali_2 October 31, 2007, 11:44am 3

Re: sabhii kuchh hai teraa diyaa huaa

very nice BB :k:

bholibisri October 31, 2007, 1:30pm 4

Re: sabhii kuchh hai teraa diyaa huaa

sabhii kuchh hai teraa diyaa huaa sabhii raahate.n sabhii kalafate.n
kabhii sohabate.n kabhii furqate.n kabhii duuriyaa.N kabhii qurbate.n

achi baat hia aur kuch tu nahi chaioey BB is k ilawa..:)

abeeha October 31, 2007, 2:39pm 5

Re: sabhii kuchh hai teraa diyaa huaa

very lengthy but cool na.

Bholay_Bisray October 31, 2007, 3:41pm 6

Re: sabhii kuchh hai teraa diyaa huaa

:no:

First Look : Don 2

Bholay_Bisray October 31, 2007, 3:42pm 7

Re: sabhii kuchh hai teraa diyaa huaa

Shukriya!

bheegiyaad October 31, 2007, 3:45pm 8

Re: sabhii kuchh hai teraa diyaa huaa

cool stuff :k:

First Look : Don 2

Bholay_Bisray October 31, 2007, 3:47pm 9

Re: sabhii kuchh hai teraa diyaa huaa

Thank You !

being_lonely October 31, 2007, 3:48pm 10

Re: sabhii kuchh hai teraa diyaa huaa

As usual outstanding choice BB :k:

SJ October 31, 2007, 3:58pm 11

Re: sabhii kuchh hai teraa diyaa huaa

Nice Ghazal:)

Bholay_Bisray October 31, 2007, 4:19pm 12

Re: sabhii kuchh hai teraa diyaa huaa

not really!

Thanks bheegiyaad.

Bholay_Bisray October 31, 2007, 4:21pm 13

Re: sabhii kuchh hai teraa diyaa huaa

Shukriya but mayri choice kub say outstanding honay lugi BL , i guess you buttering now

Shukriya

tum_bin_1 October 31, 2007, 4:25pm 14

Re: sabhii kuchh hai teraa diyaa huaa

Very Nice :k:

Shab-e-Hijar October 31, 2007, 4:46pm 15

Re: sabhii kuchh hai teraa diyaa huaa

beautiful :)

NikamiJano November 1, 2007, 1:57am 16

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goodnews November 1, 2007, 3:45am 17

Re: sabhii kuchh hai teraa diyaa huaa

chalo aao tum ko dikhaaye.N ham jo bachaa hai maqtal -e-shahar me.n
ye mazaar ahal-e-safaa ke hai.n ye hai.n ahal-e-sidq kii turbate.n
wah! Khub!

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