Sab rang Bhalay.......!

Arts & Culture Poetry ( Intikhaab & Sho'ra-e-Gupshup)
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Friends I’m sharing my gazal.

Sub rung bhalay per woh aatishi mein achha lagta hai
Hai tow shokh mager sadgi mein acha lagta hai
hamsafer ho mera woh ya ho shareek e safer
jo bhi ho mager ho zindagi mein achha lagta hai
Jaisay sharma raha ho khud ko smait ker
Mujay chand badli mein achha lagta hai
Her ada mein Woh alag nazer aata hai
muskrahtaiN apni jaga per tishnagi mein acha lagta hai
Nazer thehar gai hai us chehray per
Aur woh kehta hai sajid! awargi mein achha lagta hai

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Re: Sab rang Bhalay.......!

Agar ye aap nay likhi hai to Sho'ra-e-Gupshup maiN post karni thi....welcome here..hope you enjoy your stay here

Achi kavish hai keep sharing :-)

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Re: Sab rang Bhalay.......!

Thnx woh naya hun na tow pata nahi tha....!

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Re: Sab rang Bhalay…!

Achi koshish hey Miyan jee :clap: … keep it up :slight_smile:

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Re: Sab rang Bhalay…!

Good One Miyan Jee..:k:

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Re: Sab rang Bhalay.......!

Very Nice Miyan Jee!

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Re: Sab rang Bhalay.......!

bohat alaa mian g.

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Re: Sab rang Bhalay…!

haaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaw toh phir bhala ye konsi jagah hai :konfused:

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Re: Sab rang Bhalay.......!

Thanks to motivating me... warna kahan aap jaisay shoara aur muj jaisa gangu taili

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Re: Sab rang Bhalay.......!

na karain mian g..agar to mujhe kaha to main to hamesha khud ko tifl-e-maqtab he samajhti hun albata dusron ka pata nai :)

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Re: Sab rang Bhalay.......!

barhay log yehi kehtay hain k main kuch nhi hun......!