sab mangtay hain khushboo!!!....

bheegiyaad · June 17, 2008, 12:17pm

Sab mangtey heiN khushbu pathjharr ko kon poochey
Chaahey khizaaN ki jholi phooloN sey hi bhari ho

Samandar ka saara paani khamosh yuN khadha tha
Saahil ki raith jesey lehroN sey hi larr parri ho

YuN aaNdhioN meiN shaakheiN karti heiN shor jesey
ParindoN ke ghoNsloN par qayamat ki ik gharri ho

Seeney ki wadiyoN meiN waqt tham gaya hey aesey
LamhoN ki nabz jaisey chup saadh kar kharri ho

AaNkhoN ka kya batauN ankheiN tho yuN heiN jesey
Sookhey ke mosamoN meiN saawan ki koi jharri ho

_Masoom_Muskaan · June 17, 2008, 12:50pm

ye jes ke poem he i dont like him jesa lekhte heyn wese he dil beh acha hota toh bat he :ASA:

muncho · June 17, 2008, 1:09pm

Re: sab mangtay hain khushboo!!!....

Seeney ki wadiyoN meiN waqt tham gaya hey aesey
LamhoN ki nabz jaisey chup saadh kar kharri ho
gud one

K337 · June 17, 2008, 1:55pm

Re: sab mangtay hain khushboo!!!....

:@: bheeg muje parhna nai aata

GuL-e-Tasbeeh · June 17, 2008, 4:23pm

Aesey nahi kahtey bachey, :-)

As a poetry amazing stuff , thanks for sharing bheegi ji:-)

SunnyBoy · June 17, 2008, 6:51pm

Re: sab mangtay hain khushboo!!!..

nice :k:

Shumaisa · June 17, 2008, 9:19pm

Re: sab mangtay hain khushboo!!!..

Very Niceee Sharing.. :k:

Shab-e-Hijar · June 17, 2008, 9:47pm

bohat khoob bheegzz :)

Aryaan · June 18, 2008, 12:36am

Re: sab mangtay hain khushboo!!!..

Very Nice Bheegiyaad..:k:

bheegiyaad · June 18, 2008, 11:53am

Re: sab mangtay hain khushboo!!!....

thnx

Koyal · June 19, 2008, 3:47am

Re: sab mangtay hain khushboo!!!....

V nice bheeghi baghi se :)

redidentity · June 19, 2008, 4:19am

Re: sab mangtay hain khushboo!!!....

beautiful.. just made me shiver.. buhat khoob..

bheegiyaad · June 19, 2008, 11:50am

Re: sab mangtay hain khushboo!!!....

thnx