-- SaayoN kaY darmiyaan hooN, Saayah naheeN hooN maiN --

AQ · September 10, 2007, 6:36pm

Guzro naa iss tarah kay tamasha naheeN hooN maiN
Samjho kaY abb hooN aur dobaarah naheeN hooN maiN

Ik Taba’ RuNg RuNg thee, so naz’r-e-Gul Huee
Abb yeh kaY apnaY saath bhee rehtaa naheeN hooN maiN

Tum naY bhee meraY saath uThaaye haiN dukh bahut
Khush hooN kaY Raah-e-Shoq maiN Tanhaa naheeN hooN maiN

PeechaY naa bhaag, Waqt kee aye naa shanaas Dhoop!
SaayoN kaY darmiyaan hooN, Saayah naheeN hooN maiN

Jo kuch bhee hooN, maiN apni hee Soorat maiN hooN Aleem
Ghaalib naheeN, Meer-O-Yagaanaa naheeN hooN maiN

– Ubaidullah Aleem

NikamiJano · September 10, 2007, 8:22pm

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um naY bhee meraY saath uThaaye haiN dukh bahut
Khush hooN kaY Raah-e-Shoq maiN Tanhaa naheeN hooN maiN

nice sharing

AQ · September 11, 2007, 1:01am

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Thank you. Nawaazish.

WiseGuy · September 11, 2007, 1:05am

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kh00b.

farishta2 · September 11, 2007, 1:21am

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zaberdast...thanks for sharing...

Shab-e-Hijar · September 11, 2007, 3:57am

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enjoyed reading it :)
thanks aq for sharing :)

AQ · September 11, 2007, 4:32am

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thanks WG, farishta and Shab :)

redidentity · September 11, 2007, 5:46am

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Superb..

GuL-e-Tasbeeh · September 11, 2007, 6:42am

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bold sheir :: kyaa waqei insan khush ho sakta hey? :-)

nice sharing Anwaar

deep_ocean · September 11, 2007, 7:23am

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very nice sharing AQ :k:

SJ · September 11, 2007, 7:36am

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Tum naY bhee meraY saath uThaaye haiN dukh bahut
Khush hooN kaY Raah-e-Shoq maiN Tanhaa naheeN hooN maiN

bohat khoob AQ…:k:

Prince_Ali · September 11, 2007, 4:06pm

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wah! good one :k:

Omar_Faraz · September 14, 2007, 3:12am

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Ik Taba' RuNg RuNg thee, so naz'r-e-Gul Huee
Abb yeh kaY apnaY saath bhee rehtaa naheeN hooN maiN

This shair reminds me of the self-reflective English poetry of Wallace Stevens (1879-1955), a great American poet.

Thanks for sharing.

tum_bin_1 · September 14, 2007, 8:54am

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:k:

Jhanjharewali · September 17, 2007, 1:14am

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poignant.

Samad · September 17, 2007, 1:15am

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banda puchay gar kuch wi nayi haiN, tay lokka nu kiyo dasna pya waiN

being_lonely · September 17, 2007, 1:23am

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lost in ghazal
Thanks aq brother for sharing

sunny_nicky · September 17, 2007, 11:04am

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PeechaY naa bhaag, Waqt kee aye naa shanaas Dhoop!
SaayoN kaY darmiyaan hooN, Saayah naheeN hooN maiN

kuch khoooobb nice sharinggg