Saatvan rang

Man_de_Mouj · March 16, 2003, 7:47pm

Baal kaalay, safaid baraf say gaal
Chaand sa jism, koot badal ka
Laher ya aasteen, surkh botton
Kuch bhala sa rang tha aanchal ka
Abb kay aae tu yeh iraadaa hai
Doonon aankhon say ussko dekhon ga

Dilsay · March 16, 2003, 7:49pm

Beautiful....

Philanthrope · March 16, 2003, 7:54pm

Wah... Lovely...Zabardast Choice and what a piece of poetry...
Thanks for sharing...

ghazal_kisi_ke · March 17, 2003, 1:25am

itne tareef sis:bummer:
anyways its very nice:k::k:
thanks:~)

Philanthrope · March 17, 2003, 6:34am

LOlzz… pasand jo aae hai bohat …

TajMahal · March 17, 2003, 6:38am

very nice ....

Mirza_Ruswa · March 17, 2003, 7:49am

Re: Saatvan rang

[QUOTE]
*Originally posted by Man de Mouj: *
Baal kaalay, safaid baraf say gaal
Chaand sa jism, koot badal ka
Laher ya aasteen, surkh botton
Kuch bhala sa rang tha aanchal ka
Abb kay aae tu yeh iraadaa hai
Doonon aankhon say ussko dekhon ga

[/QUOTE]

Salaam

aha kiya bahariyaa takhayyul hai

thanx for sharing

Mirza Ruswa

Man_de_Mouj · March 17, 2003, 10:44am

Re: Re: Saatvan rang

[QUOTE]
*Originally posted by Mirza Ruswa: *

Salaam

aha kiya bahariyaa takhayyul hai

thanx for sharing

Mirza Ruswa
[/QUOTE]

Waliekum Assalam Mirza Ruswa...pasand karnay ka shoukria

aik shar mulahiza hoo

                   ab too Meer koe pouchta hi naheen
                   es ashqi main izat-o-sadaat bhi gae

ghazal_kisi_ke · March 17, 2003, 11:12pm

kon pasand aa gaya:eek:
aur apne mujhe batia bhi nahi:crying:

Philanthrope · March 18, 2003, 7:47am

Read my line again mooti pasand aa nahi gaya … pasand aae ( Nazam pasand aae ) iss liye bool diya

Azad · March 18, 2003, 8:21am

GKK Azad slimming center say rabta karain

Azad · March 18, 2003, 8:27am

Re: Saatvan rang

bohut khoob :k: par aap batana pasand karain gay keh kia pehli baar daikhtay howay dossri aankh sandal ki nazar ho gaii thi?

Man_de_Mouj · March 18, 2003, 1:06pm

Re: Re: Saatvan rang

jee jee, pehlee baar zara uchat-tee hoe se nigha ki thee, ab kay baar zara ghour say…theek hay na

Azad · March 18, 2003, 1:43pm

mojan mojh malangaan dee, par aap daikh kis ko rahay ho?

Philanthrope · March 18, 2003, 3:12pm

Re: Re: Saatvan rang

LOlzzz… experience bolta hai …

ghazal_kisi_ke · March 19, 2003, 1:47am

mujhe to kuch dal mein kala lagat hai;)
woh to tum ne by mistake likh diya aae actually u was going to write pasand aa gaya;)
yaar waise ab mujhe se kia chupana:~)
and one thing more yeh mein moti kab se mashhoor ho gayee:bummer:

Azad ab itna fazool pesaa kis ke paas hai:bummer:

aadhoorighazal · March 19, 2003, 11:35pm

Re: Saatvan rang

[QUOTE]
*Originally posted by Man de Mouj: *
Baal kaalay, safaid baraf say gaal
Chaand sa jism, koot badal ka
Laher ya aasteen, surkh botton
Kuch bhala sa rang tha aanchal ka
Abb kay aae tu yeh iraadaa hai
Doonon aankhon say ussko dekhon ga

[/QUOTE]

bohat dinoon kae baad itnee haseen cheez parhanae ko milee.............thanks Mouj ji.

ayman · March 19, 2003, 11:51pm

bohot khoob :k:

Philanthrope · March 20, 2003, 6:17am

Beta jee …aab tum mujh se bohat bura pito gi… tayyar raho …

Azad · March 20, 2003, 6:27am

aap kay liay one year free, our humain maloom hai keh aik saal main hatni ka to wazan kam hona nahi.

Motti … mottapay ka sun kar hi mou ka zyqa kharab ho jata hay