Saans Rukk Si Jaati Hai..

Arts & Culture Poetry ( Intikhaab & Sho'ra-e-Gupshup)
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Meri Aik Nazm, Jo Mujhe Bhi Buhat Pasand Hai..

Saans Rukk Si Jaati Hai
Dil Bhi Toot Jata Hai
Jab Koi Buhat Apna
Hum Se Rooth Jata Hai

Aablon Ke Phatnay Ka
Dard Phir He Hota Hai
Pyar Kernay Wala Jab
Ibtida Safar Main Hee
Hum Se Chhoot Jata Hai

(Ahmer)

Umeed Hai Aap Logon Ko Pasand Aye Gi..

Regards,

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Re: Saans Rukk Si Jaati Hai..

start tou acha liya hey Ahmer lekin ''aabloN k phatney ka'' yahan tak achi hey end kuch theekh nahi aap nazm aik baar complete kartey heiN ya waqfoN sey, jab kuch na ban parey tou thora gap rakhna chahiye ,anyway just my point of view asal baat tou ye hey ke alfaaz dil ki gehraai sey likhey hon , ager aapko yunhi sahi lag rahi hey tou theek hi hogi, :~)
thanks for sharing

Marriage-To those who are married... Not married..and soon to be married..
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Re: Saans Rukk Si Jaati Hai..

Jee Gul-e-Tasbeeh.. Yeh Nazm One-Go Main He Complete Hui Thee.. n I Never Added Any Line By Force.. It Was Al-by-itself.. :$

PS: Btw Thanks Alot For Sincere Comments..

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Re: Saans Rukk Si Jaati Hai..

very nice :)