ehsan
June 3, 2012, 5:22pm
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**Saamne Manzil Thi, Aur Peeche Uss Ki Aawaaz,
Rukta Toh Safar Jaata, Chalta To Bichhar Jaata,
Mekhana Bhi Ussi Ka Tha, Mehkaar Bhi Ussi Ka Tha,
Agar Peeta To Imaan Jata, Na Peeta To Sanam Jaata,
Saza Aisi Mili Mujh Ko, Zakham Aise Lage Dil Par,
Chhupata To Jigar Jaata, Sunata To Bikhar Jaata,
Mere Gham Ki Dawa Na Thhi, Siwaye Yaar Ke Koochay Ke,
Main Jaun To Kidhar Jaun, Main Jata To Kidhar Jata.**
Re: Saamne Manzil Thi, Aur Peeche Uss Ki Aawaaz
Very nice..
Alif Laila ki kahaniyon main likha hua hai hai ke peeche dekne wale pathar ke ho jate hain. Lekin iss shayar ke sath to kuch ziada hi masla hai... Itna ghambeer masla to shadi ke laddoo ka bhi nahin :)
KKF
June 3, 2012, 5:35pm
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Re: Saamne Manzil Thi, Aur Peeche Uss Ki Aawaaz
Saza Aisi Mili Mujh Ko, Zakham Aise Lage Dil Par,
Chhupata To Jigar Jaata, Sunata To Bikhar Jaata,
bahot Khoob...nafees intiKhaab...'aam taur par log 'daaGH-e-jigar' qubool karte haiN! :D
Re: Saamne Manzil Thi, Aur Peeche Uss Ki Aawaaz
Zabardast!
ehsan
June 3, 2012, 8:29pm
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Re: Saamne Manzil Thi, Aur Peeche Uss Ki Aawaaz
^ Thanks
Re: Saamne Manzil Thi, Aur Peeche Uss Ki Aawaaz
Bohat Khoob....
LP
June 3, 2012, 10:31pm
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Re: Saamne Manzil Thi, Aur Peeche Uss Ki Aawaaz
**Saamne Manzil Thi, Aur Peeche Uss Ki Aawaaz,
Rukta Toh Safar Jaata, Chalta To Bichhar Jaata,
Mekhana Bhi Ussi Ka Tha, Mehkaar Bhi Ussi Ka Tha,
Agar Peeta To Imaan Jata, Na Peeta To Sanam Jaata,
Saza Aisi Mili Mujh Ko, Zakham Aise Lage Dil Par,
Chhupata To Jigar Jaata, Sunata To Bikhar Jaata,
Mere Gham Ki Dawa Na Thhi, Siwaye Yaar Ke Koochay Ke,
Main Jaun To Kidhar Jaun, Main Jata To Kidhar Jata.**
v niceee
Saamne Manzil Thi, Aur Peeche Uss Ki Aawaaz,
Rukta Toh Safar Jaata, Chalta To Bichhar Jaata,
aise mai insan ko kya kerna chahiye ?
ehsan
June 3, 2012, 10:34pm
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Re: Saamne Manzil Thi, Aur Peeche Uss Ki Aawaaz
Oothaye hee khlota rawey.
LP
June 3, 2012, 10:35pm
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Re: Saamne Manzil Thi, Aur Peeche Uss Ki Aawaaz
waheen kharey raheyga tou sub kuch jayega hath se
Re: Saamne Manzil Thi, Aur Peeche Uss Ki Aawaaz
Samnay Manzil thi aur Peechay us ki Aawaz
Rukta to safar jata, Chalta to bicher Jata,
Manzil ki bhi Hasrat thi, aur us se Muhabbat Bhi
Ay Dil btaa mujh ko, Us wkt me kidher Jata,
Muddat ka safar bhi tha, aur Barson ki Shanasaai Bhi
Rukta to Bikher Jata, Chalta to Main Marr Jata,
Lagi Piyaas ghazab ki thi Pani main bhi Zeher Tha
Peeta to Marr jata, na Peeta to bhi Marr Jata…!!! -
P_G
March 29, 2014, 8:21am
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Re: Saamne Manzil Thi, Aur Peeche Uss Ki Aawaaz
**
Saza Aisi Mili Mujh Ko, Zakham Aise Lage Dil Par,
Chhupata To Jigar Jaata, Sunata To Bikhar Jaata,
sigh **
Diva
March 29, 2014, 3:31pm
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:k: