Saahil ki reit jesey lehroN sey larr parri ho...

Amal · September 28, 2007, 12:35pm

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Sab maangtey heiN khushbu pat’jharr ko kon poochey
chaahey khizaaN ki jholi phooloN sey hi bhari ho

samandar ka saara paani khamosh yuN kharra tha
saahil ki reit jesey lehroN sey larr parri ho

yuN aaNdhioN meiN shaakheiN karti heiN shor jesey
parindoN ke ghoNsaloN par qayaamat ki ik gharri ho

seeney ki waadiyoN meiN waqt tham gaya hey aesey
lamhoN ki nabz jesey chup saadh kar kharri ho

aaNkhoN ka kya bataaoN ankheiN to yuN heiN jesey
sookhey ke mosamoN meiN saawan ki koi jharri ho**

By: Amal

bheegiyaad · September 28, 2007, 12:40pm

Re: Saahil ki reit jesey lehroN sey larr parri ho...

very nice :)
bohat din baad aap ko parna acha laga

Aliyish · September 28, 2007, 12:59pm

Re: Saahil ki reit jesey lehroN sey larr parri ho...

Bohat alaa Bahi :)

SJ · September 28, 2007, 2:36pm

Re: Saahil ki reit jesey lehroN sey larr parri ho…

yuN aaNdhioN meiN shaakheiN karti heiN shor jesey
parindoN ke ghoNsaloN par qayaamat ki ik gharri ho
seeney ki waadiyoN meiN waqt tham gaya hey aesey
lamhoN ki nabz jesey chup saadh kar kharri ho

Awesome…
bohat umdaa Ghazal hai…
bt ye ashaar bohat touchy hain:k:

chacha_Ghalib · September 28, 2007, 3:12pm

Re: Saahil ki reit jesey lehroN sey larr parri ho...

wah

P_G · September 28, 2007, 4:32pm

Re: Saahil ki reit jesey lehroN sey larr parri ho...

[QUOTE]
samandar ka saara paani khamosh yuN kharra tha
saahil ki reit jesey lehroN sey larr parri ho
[/QUOTE]

hmmm

Shab-e-Hijar · September 28, 2007, 4:45pm

Re: Saahil ki reit jesey lehroN sey larr parri ho…

bohat khoob :k:

Jaan_Lewaa · September 29, 2007, 2:37am

Re: Saahil ki reit jesey lehroN sey larr parri ho...

aswesome, bhut achay

AQ · September 29, 2007, 4:20am

Re: Saahil ki reit jesey lehroN sey larr parri ho...

very nice :)

redidentity · September 29, 2007, 4:27am

Re: Saahil ki reit jesey lehroN sey larr parri ho...

beautiful.. :)

Sheal · September 29, 2007, 7:06pm

Re: Saahil ki reit jesey lehroN sey larr parri ho...

very nice :)

Ali_2 · September 30, 2007, 4:03pm

Re: Saahil ki reit jesey lehroN sey larr parri ho...

buhat khoob

Azad · October 1, 2007, 2:35pm

Re: Saahil ki reit jesey lehroN sey larr parri ho…

bohut khoob :k:

yuN aaNdhioN meiN shaakheiN karti heiN shor jesey

ghalban na’ey MOD ka zikar karna zaroori tha

_Masoom_Muskaan · October 1, 2007, 2:37pm

Re: Saahil ki reit jesey lehroN sey larr parri ho...

v nice amal bhae :)

GuL-e-Tasbeeh · October 9, 2007, 1:11pm

Re: Saahil ki reit jesey lehroN sey larr parri ho...

buhat khoob, har sheir aik sey barrh ke aik hey:-)

ghazal_kisi_ke · October 9, 2007, 10:31pm

Re: Saahil ki reit jesey lehroN sey larr parri ho...

beautiful!

WiseGuy · October 10, 2007, 4:24am

Re: Saahil ki reit jesey lehroN sey larr parri ho…

bohat khoob :k:
“خشبو” kee yeh spelling pasand aai