Saada see batein

muskurahet seye, churateye huveye
baatein aam see kheneye meye
wohh apneye seb dukh chupata heye
saada see baatein ker ker
herr aik dukh ko mitata jata heye
…
aiseye jo huva, jo ageye ho ga
iss seye kervet badl ker jeiseye,
aik nanneye seye betcheye kee terhan
wohh hensta heye, hansata heye
…
wohh admi
apni saari saada see batein
keh’ta rheta heye
semjha aur suna bhee jata heye
…
mager saari saada see baatein
iss kee, uljhee uljhee hein
khas tanao rakhtee hein
heraani kee baat heye yeye,
saada see baatein

Dushwari

Re: Saada see batein

v. nice

Re: Saada see batein

thanks, s 786

& best,

Dushwari

Re: Saada see batein

Buhat khoob dushwari sis:-)

Re: Saada see batein

beautiful.. really superb..

Re: Saada see batein

thanks, everybody. i really appreciate that every one of you liked this poem.

best,
Dushwari