Saada see batein

muskurahet seye, churateye huveye
baatein aam see kheneye meye
wohh apneye seb dukh chupata heye
saada see baatein ker ker
herr aik dukh ko mitata jata heye

aiseye jo huva, jo ageye ho ga
iss seye kervet badl ker jeiseye,
aik nanneye seye betcheye kee terhan
wohh hensta heye, hansata heye

wohh admi
apni saari saada see batein
keh’ta rheta heye
semjha aur suna bhee jata heye

mager saari saada see baatein
iss kee, uljhee uljhee hein
khas tanao rakhtee hein
heraani kee baat heye yeye,
saada see baatein

Dushwari

Re: Saada see batein

v. nice

Re: Saada see batein

thanks, s 786

& best,

Dushwari

Re: Saada see batein

Buhat khoob dushwari sis:-)

Re: Saada see batein

beautiful.. really superb..

Re: Saada see batein

thanks, everybody. i really appreciate that every one of you liked this poem.

best,
Dushwari