Rungoli Dhenekh

dekho, wafa, jafa, aur umeed kee
aik rungoli dhenekh,
yeye keisey rung hein iss key,
miltey hoveye sey, helkey jaisey
sayaye hoon mayoos sardiyoon kee dhoop mey
tenha parindey jaisey ayeye hoon,
yey intiha kitnee zahiree se hey, kiyamet
mager iss kee baka,
afsos key heye faket wohhii fasla
kho chuktee see heye,
tebhii sey is kee chemekh
theiree hovee see hein jo ummeed kee purwaiyaan
in kamosh ehsasat keye asmanoon per,
abhii nazr mey hein, dheree wafa key rung sey
bheree muthiyan
bikher jateen tow kya na acha hota
smenbhal sey leyetey, jeb achanek kebhii
tow aisey nahi beyrung sey legtey abhii..
leikin, tum mey kahan tha aisa hosla?
tum mey kahan heye aisa hosla?

Dushwari

Re: Rungoli Dhenekh

buhat khob dushwari
words selection is superb
buhat khoob

Re: Rungoli Dhenekh

dead: matlub aap ko kalay kaway ka dar nahi raha.

Re: Rungoli Dhenekh

azad : ap kia sirf qafiay say qafiya milti hui he ghazalian ya aisi nazmain he parhtay hain

Re: Rungoli Dhenekh

Azad,

kaley kevey sey khoob wakif hein, han, aap gidooon keye sath kaisey karein geye hemderdee?

Re: Rungoli Dhenekh

thanks, Dead soul.
Best,

Dushwari

Re: Rungoli Dhenekh

Buhat achi nazm..

Re: Rungoli Dhenekh

thanks, redidentity.
Dushwari