ROYE...

Shazia_Arif · January 12, 2011, 3:14pm

ye kaisa ajab sa khel hai,kabhi khoya kabhi pa k roye
wo kahani to adhoori he rhi,jise suna suna k roye

na chahte b ashkon ko maskan bana lia
kabhi munh chupa kay,kabhi zar zar roye

dil kirchion sa bikhra,lafzon kay teer se
sab kuch tha raizah raizah,kya kya luta k roye

hum ne kabhi na chaha torrain kisi ko pal mai
phir hum kiun toot gaye,hairat daba kay roye

ye kaisa darya hai jo kabhi na bhar saka
kabhi khoon-e-dil bahaya,kabhi ansu baha k roye

kesa ye dil ka hal hai dono na samajh sake
kuch wo suna k roye,kuch hum suna k roye…

Amarbail · January 12, 2011, 3:19pm

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Lovely …:k:

Amal · January 12, 2011, 3:47pm

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Shazia ji bohat achi ghazal kahi aap ney :k: … likhti rahiye aur navazti rahiye

ehsan · January 12, 2011, 3:50pm

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buahat hee achee ghazal, wah. :k:

Shazia_Arif · January 12, 2011, 4:57pm

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thanx all of you.

Sannan · January 13, 2011, 7:21am

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Shaiza g buhat aala Bus mujhay do Ahsaa’r mein kuch tashnagi mahsoos hoi hay

ye kaisa ajab sa khel hai,kabhi** khoya** kabhi pa k roye
wo kahani to adhoori he rhi,jise suna suna k roye

Agar iss ko kabhi kho k kay kar dain to ziyada rawani mahsoos hogi
ye kaisa ajab sa khel hai,kabhi **kho k ** kabhi pa k roye

Aur dosra she’r
na chahte b ashkon ko maskan bana lia
kabhi munh chupa kay,kabhi zar zar roye
aap akhir mein k laga rahi hain jub kah iss eh’r mein k add naheen howa hay , mein expert naheen hoon leekan mujhay yah kuch darust maloon naheen ho raha hay
iss ko ulat kar dain
**kabhi zara zara , **kabhi munh chupa kay roye
aur shyad yah aap zara zara likhna chah rahi hain

Shazia_Arif · January 13, 2011, 1:48pm

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thanx…mai ap ki raye ki tah-e-dil se qadar kerti hun lakin ab mai isse diary mai likh chuki hun so cn’t change it or ye zar zar lagataar wala hai

Sannan · January 14, 2011, 4:48am

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Waisay ya Zar Zar Ronna mein nay kabhi naheen parha hay

Zaro Qatar Ronna Parha hay mein nay leekan zar zar
Any one Comments please

UZ · January 14, 2011, 5:23am

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Nice ghazal Shazia :k:

Shazia_Arif · January 14, 2011, 6:22am

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any one ko na bulain main khud he tishnagi poori ker deti hun…its a right word…go n check lughaat

Shazia_Arif · January 14, 2011, 6:23am

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thanx UZ:)

Sannan · January 14, 2011, 7:58am

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It seems no one reading poetry deeply Else they must give comment on this word
aik to taseeh karo aur opar say batain suno

Boredman · January 14, 2011, 9:51am

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Cool Nice One !!

Shazia_Arif · January 14, 2011, 12:34pm

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thanx BM.

rajey · January 15, 2011, 8:22am

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Yeh ishq ki kudrat thi, ya phair thay samajh ke
kuch wo suna k roye,kuch hum suna k roye...

Shazia_Arif · January 15, 2011, 4:52pm

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thanx n v nice rajey.

KKF · January 15, 2011, 5:01pm

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**
“zaar zaar” ronaa saHeeH hai…ek she’r kisii ustaad shaa’ir kaa thaa:

kabhii muskuraa ke roye, kabhii zaar zaar roye

yahaN “muskura ke roye” kaa matlab hai “Khushii ke aaNsoo-oN” se ronaa**

Shazia_Arif · January 16, 2011, 6:09am

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thanx Kalil g ap ne tasdeeq ker di