rota raha qatil tanha

Capricorn · November 19, 2003, 12:28pm

sub kay honton pay tabassum thaa mairay qatal kay baad
jaanay kiss baaaat pay rota raha qatil tanha

Azad · November 19, 2003, 12:37pm

Bechara

Dilsay · November 19, 2003, 1:30pm

Wah

Guest7777 · November 19, 2003, 3:46pm

kya bemurawat loog hain sub jaman hain bismal kai pass
tanha maira qatil reha koi nahi qatil kai pass :(

nice work capricorn

Capricorn · November 19, 2003, 4:10pm

Thanks :k:

Capricorn · November 19, 2003, 4:15pm

Thank you Azad and Dilsay :k:

Azad · November 19, 2003, 9:39pm

kisi nay humain thank you kaha hay .. aaj din konsay hay

Capricorn · November 19, 2003, 9:49pm

Azad · November 19, 2003, 9:55pm

bhai gamla bhi daytay jain …

Daagh · November 19, 2003, 10:19pm

nice one capri :flower1:

ek humari taraf se bhi

qaatil ki is adaa pe bhi qurbaan jaaye
khud de ke zahar aankhon mein aassu bhi bhar liye*

system · November 19, 2003, 10:39pm

:k:

jasmeen · November 20, 2003, 7:17pm

usy qatal kerny kay baad yaad aya ho ga kay us ka udhar rah gay hay jubhi roya..:D

Capricorn · November 20, 2003, 8:03pm

[QUOTE]
*Originally posted by Azad: *

bhai gamla bhi daytay jain ...
[/QUOTE]

aap kee jaan hamein azeez hai :)

Capricorn · November 20, 2003, 8:05pm

Shaheedon mein naam likhaya, laakhon paye

Capricorn · November 20, 2003, 8:06pm

:k:

Capricorn · November 20, 2003, 8:09pm

cuteepie · November 21, 2003, 12:28am

:)

Philanthrope · November 21, 2003, 4:20pm

Wah lovely shair :k:

Shoki · November 21, 2003, 4:30pm

ASA · November 21, 2003, 7:59pm

Waaah...