~Roshan Roshan Khuwab Thay Meray~

Arts & Culture Poetry ( Intikhaab & Sho'ra-e-Gupshup)

fara September 12, 2006, 7:19pm 1

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Jalte Bujhtay Khuwab Thay Meray, Roshan Roshan Khaab Thay Meray
Hum Tu Ek Dojay Main Gum Thay, Kaisay Kaisay Khaab Thay Meray

Sehra Bhee Gulshan Lagta Tha, Uskay Sang Bus Dil Hansta Tha
Mosam Kitnay Rang Bharay Thay, **Kitnay Ujlay Khuwab Thay Meray
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Uski Ankhon Kay Jado Say, Uski Bahoon Kay Halkay Main
Meray Her Ek Chak Sila Tha, Kitnay Alher Khaab Thay Meray

Usko Daikhoon, Usko Pojoon, Waqt Ka Derya Behta Jayee
Main Uski dherdkan Main Basi Thee, Kitnay Anokhay Khaab Thay Meray

Koonj Say Bichri Daar Thee Main, Usnay Mujhko Tham Liya Tha
Mujhko Jeena Sikhlaya Tha, Kitnay Piyaray Khaab Thay Meray

Meray Dil Main Bass Sa Gaya Wu, Meri Rooh Ka Sacha Sathee
Wu Jab Bichra Tab Main Samghi, Kitnay Jhootay Khuwab Thay Meray

Fara

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system September 12, 2006, 7:30pm 2

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hein? ye kese o sakta hi fhotey khwab

fara September 12, 2006, 7:33pm 3

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**What exactly do u mean? Care to explain.

Shukran

Fara
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system September 12, 2006, 7:40pm 4

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Usko Daikhoon, Usko Pojoon, Waqt Ka Derya Behta Jayee
Main Uski dherdkan Main Basi Thee, Kitnay Anokhay Khaab Thay Meray

babami yeh ekh kar har keh raghi thi k kitne meethee khwub the ap e:hoonh:

The Question Game

Zamil September 12, 2006, 9:47pm 5

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Shayad aap ne ghazal likhi thi lekin ye nazm hi kehlaaye gi coz qaafiya nahi hai.
BTW bohat achi hai, zabardast... :)
Khush rahiye...

darwesh September 13, 2006, 1:58am 6

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Fara Saheba... Khushbash,

Aap Khushkismat Hain Ke Aapne Khatte Meethe Khwaab To Dekhe,
Kitne Hain Jinhen Aise Khwaab Dekhe Honge.... Ya Koshish Ki Hogi ?
Taabeerain Hameesha Ek Si, Ya Aapni Marzi Ki Nahi Hua Karteen,
Tabeer Sachhi Ussi Waqt Mumkin Hai, Jab Khawaab Dekha Jaye.
Bari Rawaani Hai.... Bohat Mosiqiyat...Rimjhim Jharne Ki Manind,
Aapke Khaab Main.... Keep It Up..... Woh Subh Kabhi To Aaye Gi !

Darwesh.

Sannan September 13, 2006, 5:05am 7

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buhat khoub Fara G .....Khuwab aur khaab ko baray achay tareeqay say byaan kia aap nay par

Khawab Hotay Hain Daikhnay Kay Liye
Inn Main Ja Kar Mar Raha Karoo Tum

fara September 13, 2006, 6:22am 8

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**Zamil

Ab yeh tu nahi pata kia likha hay.. koshish tu ghazal ki he thee..

Pasandeedgi Ka Shukriya!!

Fara
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fara September 13, 2006, 6:26am 9

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**Derwesh Ji

Main aap say kulli toar per muttafiq hoon... Khuwab tu bus, khud bakhud bas jatay hain..

Meri tehreer buhat aam si hay, aam si sochain aur aam say khayyalat.. aap nay pasand kia, bay had shukriya!

Fara
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fara September 13, 2006, 6:38am 10

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*Thanks alot Sannan.. *

Dushwari September 13, 2006, 10:49am 11

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there is something called free verse, other people!!!!!

Fara, nice poetry.
there is balance and there is true emotions reflected in this.

carry on!
best ,
Dushi

fara September 15, 2006, 7:20am 12

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**Thanks a lot dushi...

Shukran

Fara

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Prince_Ali September 16, 2006, 3:51pm 13

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very nice :k:

mahamkhan September 28, 2006, 9:00am 14

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very very nice....

sunny_nicky September 29, 2006, 9:35pm 15

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nicee 111

fara September 30, 2006, 12:23pm 16

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Shukran Prince, Maham and Sunny

Fara

eye_candy October 14, 2006, 5:41pm 17

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mind blowing , amazing , lovely. aisi pyari poetry share kartie raha kijiye.