Ro Lena

IS · December 29, 2004, 3:13pm

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Gamma_Dilation · December 29, 2004, 5:27pm

simple, easy to follow poem with a blue punch.

Aryaan · December 29, 2004, 6:26pm

very nice..:k:

m_kamal · December 29, 2004, 8:06pm

weldone:k:

IS · December 29, 2004, 8:38pm

Thanks All

chand_chera · December 30, 2004, 2:51pm

awww so sweet and touching :k:

IS · January 4, 2005, 9:56pm

Re: Ro Lena

Pasand karnay ka sukriya

system · January 4, 2005, 10:29pm

Re: Ro Lena

Mujhe urdu lessons chahiye

IS · January 4, 2005, 10:31pm

Re: Ro Lena

^^ kiss cheez kay ?????????

system · January 4, 2005, 10:38pm

Re: Ro Lena

Parnay kay, I can’t read urdu Muje sirf Amazon wali urdu ati hai :halo:

IS · January 4, 2005, 10:43pm

Re: Ro Lena

yea Amazon wali urdu koon si hay :-|
kia is ko b translate karna hay :-|

Golden_Scorpion_1 · January 5, 2005, 6:54am

Re: Ro Lena

JO Urdu Sherni ko Samjah Ati hay.. Ussay AMOZON Ki Urdu kehtay haiN

NICE one IS
**Chupkay chupkay Ro lena **

Shab-e-Hijar · January 5, 2005, 7:07am

Re: Ro Lena

Nice :k:

IS · January 5, 2005, 1:36pm

Re: Ro Lena

hehe
thanks GS

IS · January 5, 2005, 1:37pm

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Thanks

reet · January 6, 2005, 5:00am

Re: Ro Lena

GS g

PS. roman version…

Golden_Scorpion_1 · January 6, 2005, 6:39am

Re: Ro Lena

Ye lo

Chupke Chupke Ro Lena..

Jab seena gham se boojhal ho
Aur yaad kissi ki aati ho
Tab kamray maiN band ho jana
Aur chupke chupke ro lena
**

Jab ankhaiN baaGhi jo jayaiN
Aur yaad maiN meri bhar ayaiN
Phir khud ko dhooka matt dena
Aur chupke chupke ro lena
**

Ye dunya zaalim dunya hay
Ye baat buhu phelayegi
Tum saamnay sab ke chup rehna
Aur chupke chupke ro lena
**

Jab palkaiN karb se moondi hoN
Aur sab samjhaiN tum soi ho
Tabb muN pe takia rakh lena
Aur chupke chupke ro lena
**

Jab baarish chehra dhoo Daalay
Aur ashk bhi boondaiN lagti hoN
Wo lamhay hargiz matt khoona
*Aur chupke chupke ro lena *
**

reet · January 8, 2005, 10:28am

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thnkew GS g…

aapki help ke bina mein itni achchi poem nahi par sakti thi…

** Innocent_Smile**

very nice…

IS · January 8, 2005, 2:36pm

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^^ Thanks
next time say mein koshish kiya karoon ga kay roman urdu mein he post kiya karon
liken mujay urdu wali post zaida achi lagti hay

punjabi_kuri · January 8, 2005, 7:49pm

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nice.