Right here we Go!

Hey in case you don’t know, i’m a new member of the forum and here is a poem i just did a few minutes ago. lol. I do hope you all enjoy it. I will post more soon!

**I picked a rose that pricked me** **Its thorns sharp and subtle** **** **Drops of blood as red as wine** **Yet the sun will still not shine** **** **Cold and numb as if in the cellar** **No warmth of fire, I remain a dweller** **** **True, my love I bid thee** **Together one day we shall be** **** **The torch will alight once more** **A flame will burn as before** **** **In pain I am here all alone** **Distance there is between us** **** **Your love is such a rose dear** **Its thorns sharp and subtle**

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nice appreciable effort and welcome to the forum :)

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Welcome , you can share your urdu version too if you wrote any:-)

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its beautiful.

nice sharing !!!