I love you
Not for what
I want you to be
But for what you are
I love you then
For what you were
I love you now
For what you have become
I miss what I am
-me
Re: Rhythms of Love
^ Hum, message to bara gehra hai. So you wrote it yourself. Achi hai ...........
Re: Rhythms of Love
well it sounds good...u wrote it or the poet is some one else
Re: Rhythms of Love
nice.......and quite deep
Re: Rhythms of Love
Very interesting. To me, it signifies the intent of loving someone persistently enough to forget yourself. I would suggest a minor change in the last line. It should best be:
I miss what I *was.*