Return of Let's Play Forum Forum Series: Poetry - Intikhab

A typical post in Intikhab:

Meri Begum hai Jealous Khawaateen saY
Poochti hai yeh miss Faakhirah kaun hai
I.D Card meraa banaa tau kahaa!
Ab Bataao MujhaY ‘NADRA’ kaun hai

Typical Replies to this post:

Wow

very nice

Wah bahut khoob

amazing…

Thanks for sharing

one of my favourites

Re: Return of Let’s Play Forum Forum Series: Poetry - Intikhab

Maitnee show main chalaiN gay
Jatt da puttar daikhnay
:smooth:

Main tu apnay paisay dooN gaa
tum udhaaraa daikhnaa
:naraz:

Re: Return of Let's Play Forum Forum Series: Poetry - Intikhab

Mundarjaa balaa sher maiN naa qafiyaa hai naa radeef..

Tukk bandi kaa bhee khiyaaL naheeN rakhaa gayaa

kiya yeh aazad shaairy hai? Kiss na hanjaar kee shaairy hai... shaair kaa naam bataayaa jayee!!!

Re: Return of Let's Play Forum Forum Series: Poetry - Intikhab

buhat khoob. keep it up :)

Re: Return of Let's Play Forum Forum Series: Poetry - Intikhab

Thanks Khumar
Iss par apnaa zaati aik sher yaad aayaa jiss kaa pehlaa misra' Iqbal saY udhaar liyaa gayaa hai:

Qulzum-e-Hasti saY ubhraa hai tu maaniNd-e-Hubaab
Chal jaa cycle maiN hawaa bhar, naQshaY naa karaa

Re: Return of Let's Play Forum Forum Series: Poetry - Intikhab

hubaab and karaa don't really rhyme. otherwise this is good :)

Re: Return of Let's Play Forum Forum Series: Poetry - Intikhab

Forum forum poetry khelney ka shoq hai Qureshi saab ko
Chal Araam se wah wah kar ankhain na dikha baap ko

Re: Return of Let's Play Forum Forum Series: Poetry - Intikhab

woh iss liye kaY ghazal kaa har doosraa misraa pehlaY sher kaY doosraY misraY saY rhym kartaa hai :) let me give u an example:

Qulzum-e-Hasti saY ubhraa hai tu maaniNd-e-Hubaab
Chal jaa cycle maiN hawaa bhar, naQshaY naa karaa

kal ho gaya phaDDa ghumsaan kaa mera mohallaY maiN
maiN naY uNglee maroRi tau woh cheekha: "AbaY maraa"

Re: Return of Let's Play Forum Forum Series: Poetry - Intikhab

wah wah kiya sher akhey ian :)

Re: Return of Let's Play Forum Forum Series: Poetry - Intikhab

jee yeh mainay raat ko chandni raat ko dekhtay huay likha tha. Comments are appreciated :)

Roses are Red
Violets are Blue
You were hanging outside my window
And then I slapped you

:)

Re: Return of Let’s Play Forum Forum Series: Poetry - Intikhab

:rotfl:nice

Re: Return of Let's Play Forum Forum Series: Poetry - Intikhab

wah wah

Re: Return of Let’s Play Forum Forum Series: Poetry - Intikhab

Adaab arz hai :blush:

kisi misray waghaira ya kisi aur kism ki mithai ko to nahin change karna? :bummer:

Re: Return of Let's Play Forum Forum Series: Poetry - Intikhab


meraY khiyaaL maiN yeh chaandni raat ko naheeN, CHAAND KHAN ko dekh kar likhaa gaya thaa :)

waisay iss maiN aik talmeeh hai... kissi ki waardaat-e-qalb kaa zik'r nihaayat rangeen mizaaji saY kiyaa gaya hai :)

Re: Return of Let’s Play Forum Forum Series: Poetry - Intikhab

jee aap ko kis nay bataya :blush:

aur agar rangeen mizaaj say shair na bola jaye to phir woh shair nahin hota. Kya khoob kaha hai kisi nay, keh jab tak kisi ko stalk nahin kiya jaata, woh pakka shair nahin banta.

Re: Return of Let’s Play Forum Forum Series: Poetry - Intikhab

uss nay ik ek boti ko yakja hai kata
but yehi bat achi hai mere qasaii ki

:blush:

Re: Return of Let’s Play Forum Forum Series: Poetry - Intikhab

uncle stalker’s thought will be appreciated on this matter.

Re: Return of Let’s Play Forum Forum Series: Poetry - Intikhab

wah wah :clap:

kya baat hai khumar aunty ki :D…vaisay ussay ziyada chaut tho nahee lagee? :clown:

Re: Return of Let’s Play Forum Forum Series: Poetry - Intikhab

oh my god… I love that sher of Nasreen jaabir :love:

Re: Return of Let’s Play Forum Forum Series: Poetry - Intikhab

jee hum unhi kay aglay misray ka intizaar kar rahay hain

mohtarma sweet aap ka shukriya :slight_smile:

Sajal Baji :lajawab: