Ret per likh ker mera naam mitaya na karo

Arts & Culture Poetry ( Intikhaab & Sho'ra-e-Gupshup)

mahamkhan June 27, 2006, 12:16pm 1

**Ret par likh ke meraa naam mitaayaa na karo
Aankhein sach bolatii hain pyaar chupaayaa na karo **

**Log har baat kaa afsaana banaa lete hain
Sab ko haalat kii rudaad sunaayaa na karo **

**Ye zaruurii nahiin har shakhs masiihaa hii ho
Pyaar ke zakhm amaanat hain dikhaayaa na karo **

**Shahar-e-ehasaas mein patthar bahut hain ‘Mohsin’
Dil ko shiishe ke jharonkhon mein sajaayaa na karo.
**

decent_Felow June 27, 2006, 9:34pm 2

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bhooot khoooooooooooooooooooooob

mahamkhan June 28, 2006, 8:46am 3

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Thank You.....Decent felow

Devoted2Allah June 28, 2006, 9:08am 4

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Nice

did u add that name urself-mohsin?....could u add any name u want

mahamkhan June 28, 2006, 9:13am 5

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Thanx...
yeh ghazal 'Mohsin Niqvi' ki hai aur iisi wajah se maine Mohsin hi name likha hai

Prince_Ali June 28, 2006, 4:21pm 6

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Very nice :k:

mahamkhan June 29, 2006, 8:23am 7

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Thanxs...Prince ali

sad_affect June 29, 2006, 9:58am 8

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Ye zaruurii nahiin har shakhs masiihaa hii ho
Pyaar ke zakhm amaanat hain dikhaayaa na karo **
**very very superb

Sabana June 29, 2006, 11:41am 9

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boht acha:)

mahamkhan June 29, 2006, 12:31pm 10

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Thanks alot...Sad affect and Sabana

sad_affect June 30, 2006, 11:46am 11

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*Ret par likh ke meraa naam mitaayaa na karo *
*Aankhein sach bolatii hain pyaar chupaayaa na karo *

*Log har baat kaa afsaana banaa lete hain *
*Sab ko haalat kii rudaad sunaayaa na karo *

*Ye zaruurii nahiin har shakhs masiihaa hii ho *
*Pyaar ke zakhm amaanat hain dikhaayaa na karo *

Shahar-e-ehasaas mein patthar bahut hain 'Mohsin'
*Dil ko shiishe ke jharonkhon mein sajaayaa na karo. *

Zamil July 1, 2006, 10:26pm 12

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Lovvvvvely. . . :)

EEMAAN July 1, 2006, 10:32pm 13

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*Shahar-e-ehasaas mein patthar bahut hain 'Mohsin'
Dil ko shiishe ke jharonkhon mein sajaayaa na karo. *

bohat khooob..

usman22 July 2, 2006, 5:14am 14

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Ye zaruurii nahiin har shakhs masiihaa hii ho
Pyaar ke zakhm amaanat hain dikhaayaa na karo

Kya kehne kya kehne...wa Rooh taza kar di..

mahamkhan July 2, 2006, 4:10pm 15

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Thanks alot.....
Zamil,Eemaan & Usman

reet July 3, 2006, 8:55am 16

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Ye zaruurii nahiin har shakhs masiihaa hii ho
Pyaar ke zakhm amaanat hain dikhaayaa na karo

thnx for sharing this beautiful piece.......!

mahamkhan July 3, 2006, 9:59am 17

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Thanks.... Reet