Response to US NE KAHA MAIN NE KAHA :D

FairyTale · May 4, 2009, 11:31am

Uss ne kaha GS mein meray naam ki thread kholo…
Mein ne kaha tumhari nokar nahin jo thread kholoon…

Uss ne kaha GS mein meri tareefain karo…
Mein ne kaha pehlay tareef ke qabil tou banno…

Uss ne kaha Maroon ga mein..
Mein ne kaha haath meray bhi tootay nahin… :bailan

Uss ne kaha badnaam kardoon ga…
Mein ne kaha, naam tou tumharay saath jurra hoowa hai…

Uss ne kaha bak bak na karo…
Mein ne kaha tum bhi chup karo…

Uss ne kaha baap ke ghar bhijwa doon ga…
Mein ne kaha fuel ke paissay hain jaib mein ???

Uss ne kaha tumhara murder kar doon ga…
Mein ne kaha woh chooha tou maar do jo 2 din se store mein band rakha hai..

Uss ne kaha ghussa na dillao mujhay…
Mein ne kaha kuch aur dillaana mein afford nahin kar sakthi…

Uss ne kaha Haan yeh bhi theek hai…
Mein ne kaha Haan wohi tou hai na…

Uss ne kaha chalo choro, laraiee mein kiya rakha hai..
Mein ne kaha hamesha tum start kartay ho…

Uss ne kaha acha okay sorry… :jano:
Mein ne kaha acha I am sorry too.. :jano:

Uss ne kaha Friends?
Mein ne kaha For Ever…

And they lived happily ever after…

BlindHope · May 4, 2009, 2:05pm

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waaa waaa mukarar mukaraar…

i jst came to wrk and read ur poem…

simply made ma day… meri dost etni bari shairaa hai muje bataya bi nahi…
Allah saab foot sudah shairoon ki rooh ko saakon day… jo es wakat taraap rahay hon gay… aur tumain taraakeey dai …

gud luck wid ma urdu !

aqeel123 · May 4, 2009, 2:28pm

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................... Shukar hai dono chup hoey, ab neighbour araam sey so sakta hai :)

Aryaan · May 4, 2009, 3:21pm

Nice One FairyTale..:)

redidentity · May 4, 2009, 4:09pm

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aww.. its a true fairytale.. as they lived happily afterwards..

its wonderful.. very innocent..

saqi476 · May 4, 2009, 5:29pm

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hahahahahah....wazan ka problem hai lekin enjoy kia...nice effort

FairyTale · May 4, 2009, 5:30pm

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LOL…

Thank you Thank you… you all are my true friends

If you guys kept encourging me like this ,I ll soon publish my own poetry book

I hope its not a horrible news for you all

FairyTale · May 4, 2009, 5:32pm

Oh do you live in my oh sorry i mean in** OUR** neighbors ?

No prob I will tell him to gift you some ear buds

FairyTale · May 4, 2009, 5:43pm

I read "Allah saab foot sudah shairoon " 3-4 times , phir jaa kar samjh aaiee ke actual mein likha kiya hai.. lol

BlindHope · May 4, 2009, 8:53pm

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^ thats y i said … gud luck wid ma urdu… lolsssssssss

ma frds have hard time reading ma roman urdu i know i am bad… but they aint that gud…

but do i complain

aqeel123 · May 4, 2009, 9:43pm

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i got it the first time .... how else would u spell foot ?
foat ? actually in cases like this, we shld try to change words or write english next to em !

being_lonely · May 4, 2009, 11:20pm

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pretty funny :k: keep comin wid such stuff !

FairyTale · May 5, 2009, 3:56am

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^ Thanks BeingLongely - I will surely post more, it doesnt take me much time to come up with something like above.. hardly 5 mins.. lol

^^ Aqeel… i guess Fouth or Foth would be better…
But yes we can say that word in english too…

BH no problemo hun, we will read your roman some how

FairyTale · May 5, 2009, 6:23am

Thanks multiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiii… yes life should be like a fairytale isnt? At least one can try to make it one. All you have to do is to think positive, be optimistic and do not bring ego in between when its about your Love and Relationships.

Esix · May 5, 2009, 10:37am

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verrryyyyyyyyyyyyyy good

nice FT u can be a poet

very very good :k:

Esix · May 5, 2009, 10:39am

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can u guyz believe this is the first time i visited poetry section

FairyTale · May 5, 2009, 10:43am

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Thanks Esix … :rotato:

Esix · May 5, 2009, 10:46am

BH is a multi

of who?

FairyTale · May 5, 2009, 5:49pm

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Esix :pcg: who said BH is a multiiiiii ?

BlindHope · May 5, 2009, 6:22pm

she ment RED… …

u know why ?

nahi batati