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tera sada sa chehra
yeh sogwaar lehja
purnum si yeh ankhain
hain hont thartharatay
kuch kehna chahain mujhsay
lekin hain phir ruk jatay
me janta hon k na kahogi
yeh ghum akailay he sahogi
magar aey meri ajnabi dost
yeh kaisay tumha me samjhaon
jissay nahi milna hota
wo kabhi nahi milta
jo zakham bay marham ho
wo kabhi nahi siltaa
maazi k ek laa haasil ka
ab tak kio ghum karna
chordo yeh jehd-e-musalasal
yeh kio roz roz ka marna
aoo aj batwara karlaitay hain
khushyan kuch bhejta ho tumko
ansooo tum kuch yaha rawana karoo
khatam karo yeh rona dhona
kuch hansnay ka bahana karoo
ghum k iss laway ko
apni zaat say bahr behnay do
thak jaogi sehtay sehtay
kuch ghum mujhay bhi sehnay do

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magar aey meri ajnabi dost
yeh kaisay tumha me samjhaon
jissay nahi milna hota
wo kabhi nahi milta

beautiful :) v nice

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**Deadsoul, poori nazam bay-misal hay, sadda lehja lekin buhat rawani liye huway! The flow in it never breaks. Beautifully expressed, masha-Allah.

Keep sharing
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ghum k iss laway ko
apni zaat say bahr behnay do
thak jaogi sehtay sehtay
kuch ghum mujhay bhi sehnay do

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thx

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Indeed an impressive poem. Great job deadoul :k: :slight_smile:

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thank u v much fara jeee

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thx again sonia jee and amal sahab

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nice

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thx

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Kiya Khoob likhtay hain janab,
Amjad Aslam Amjad ki gazal baij raha hoon
Meray chara ger meray dard ki tujay kiya khabar
Tu meray safer ka shareek hai
Nahi Hum safer
Meray chara ger Meray dard ki tujay kiya khaber
Meray chara ger Meray charager
Teray meray darmiya n ji hath ber ka fasla
Usay manptay usay Kat tay
Mera sara safer nikal gaya, Kaee n Ruto n main badal gaya
Nahi jiss per koi nisha n pa
meray samnay hai woh rah guzer
meray chara ger meray dard ki tujay kiya khaber

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shukrya

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v nice :)

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thx

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wah jee wah
but yeh kis ko bola jaraha ha

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app fiqar na karain
sada chehray wali k lye hai

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wah wa

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thx zshan
but meri request ab tak nahi maani gayi

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so hum na konsa face painting kia huyi ha

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wah wah
buhat khoob