^Looking at the picture in that angle made me realize there may in fact be a wing to the liner. I thought it was the lashes she had on but it seems the liner was added AFTER the eye makeup was already on. Try it that way also.
U need to blend more, the line around the crease is too harsh. Try using either a cranberry or brown colour to blend above the crease to soften it.....
^I agree, try blending with a cranberry color, it'll soften the crease and look more flattering...it'll resemble the original picture more too that way.